Voted For: GKillaz05


Callin' yourself 'Lyrical Rapsody' you must be gay like 'queen'...
Have everyone readin' in a dream, couldnt wake us with caffeine...
Overall battles 14, you beat 7 newbies and you lost to 7 vets...
Callin' me out, get smoked like cigarettes, now havin' regrets...
kid sweats like in the gym... will nova have lyrically fitness...
Willnova's raps are borin' to listen to like a jehovah witness...
This kid wouldnt be able to blast if he was shootin' to impress...
I cant express your whack progress, Im goin' to win wit success...
Ima hit this wannabe MC with punches that will loosen his tooth...
Your personals are lies but if you say your losin its the truth...
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Few decent personals, punz were on point 4 da most part, good flow within ur rhymes, wordplay wuz nyce 2, not much i can fault bout dat verse, da shit wuz nyce man, u killed him


I've seen the realiest, ur neither G nor Killa//
dean or dealer, get ready fo a screamin thrilla//
leave disfigured, after I done squeezed the trigga//
bleed and quiver next to ya spleen and liver//
leak a river, reap and dig ya, here comes ya maker//
cremate and baked ya, no need fo an undertaker//
in the scene of danger, ya bodies frozen stiff//
talk 'bout stones and sticks, my words erode u b*tch//
no bones to pick, worms chew ya dome and d*ck//
wit this chrome clip, Nov spit explosive scripts//

Nah man, u had no punchlines, ur personals were not there, wordplay wuz juz way 2 basic 2 even consider it a decent verse, it wuz more ov a freestyle, u didnt focus anythin besides dat opening line @ ur oppenent, seriously...u got murderd in diz battle, no hate dawg

vote=gkillaz, much better verse, good job dawg

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