Voted For: Stanza

lol this was a weak battle......

stanza:

This Dude Is Bad Huh...Not A Win On his Record .........not Even In Graphics
Sufficate Yo Lyrics Like Plastic its Real Drastic Then Dump Yo Body Like Ashes
^^ umm ok i spsoe not real punch in there
See when Spit Ima make you fade Away like the Pic Of Tupac & Big In Ya Sig
If Wackness Came In Slides Then We All know Youd Have the Most Skids
^^ lol good concept but kinda played
Dude Lets face Reality You Really dont Have any Rap or Hip Hop Talents
They Call You Tipsy Bcuz when I Spit I Leave "ROB" "R"eally "O"ff "B"alance
^^ nice personal here
Its comin Down To an End So I guess I Can ease of The gas Pedal Of Skills
If Dopeness Was a Car Then Your Escort Wouldnt make Evenit up The Hill
^^ lol played again man
Your Not In Area So Ima Bout To Bury Ya Like Gurls dat Wont Marry Ya
Ima Tarry Up and Then Tear it Up Like You was tryin To Stear It up
^^ umm didn't rhyme

overall not a bad key it was played but it was worded ok which made it on ok punch.... so overall it was an ok verse

maverick:

Stanza...I'll 'Defocate On your Brain' To Give You Some 'Shit To Think~About'...
Only Way You Get Twisted Is When Your Clothes Are Ringing~Out...
^^ ok opener needs to be worded better
Your Rhymes Aint Heavy Weight Dawg I'll Legally Box~Ya...
I'm Burning Your Ass So Hard They Labelled me the Hot~Stuff...
^^ self glorificatin not good
Watch~out This Is A 'Hot~Bout'...But Your Fire's Gettin 'Stomped~Out'...
I'm Rising Coz I'm Smoking But You Hoping You Dont Get Knocked Out...
^^ not good punch at all first line had no connection with second line
Your Vocab Wouldn't Be Ill If I Soaked Your Brain~In~Puke...
You Firing Blanks Dawg And I'm Aiming~Nukes...
^^ not good again u have the concept but the punches r weak
You Need To Get Training~Troops...If You Wanna Beat~Me...
Or Your Gonna Have To Hire An Assassin To Do It Discreetly...
^^ umm not really good but better than most bars..

ok i think u need to elevate man... u have the concepts but the punches arent fitting so work on that also work on your flow and structure so u get better verse..

v/ stanza

had a better verse better worded pyunches better flow and structure good job u did what u needed to do pz

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