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View Poll Results: ~Lady Fiya~ vs Tweety
~Lady Fiya~ 5 100.00%
Tweety 0 0%
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Old 07-31-05, 07:19 PM   #31
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Voted For: ~Lady Fiya~

flow-Lady fiya because with a shorter verse...it's easier to keep a good flow goin.I felt as though tweety had a basic rhyme which is something I utterly hate so bad!SO flow was all LAdy Fiya here.

Imajery/Emotion/content...etc.-

Well...as for the concept...I think TWeety's 1st character/2nd character was more unique and innovative.But both of you had that emotion/sad shit.
imajery was even...while readin it...it was easy to picture it.
as for content as a whole...fiya had it

"like the lips of Judas revealed Christ, weak judgment blossoms the blessed"
^^This was dope...i like this line the most in this battle.
But wording needs to be improved by the 2 of you.There were some line worded beautifully..yes...but there were also some worded horiibly.
Vocab went to Fiya as well.Tweety's vocab was a lil bland.

Vote-Lady Fiya
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