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View Poll Results: ~Lady Fiya~ vs Tweety | |||
~Lady Fiya~ |
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5 | 100.00% |
Tweety |
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0 | 0% |
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Voted For: ~Lady Fiya~
flow-Lady fiya because with a shorter verse...it's easier to keep a good flow goin.I felt as though tweety had a basic rhyme which is something I utterly hate so bad!SO flow was all LAdy Fiya here. Imajery/Emotion/content...etc.- Well...as for the concept...I think TWeety's 1st character/2nd character was more unique and innovative.But both of you had that emotion/sad shit. imajery was even...while readin it...it was easy to picture it. as for content as a whole...fiya had it "like the lips of Judas revealed Christ, weak judgment blossoms the blessed" ^^This was dope...i like this line the most in this battle. But wording needs to be improved by the 2 of you.There were some line worded beautifully..yes...but there were also some worded horiibly. Vocab went to Fiya as well.Tweety's vocab was a lil bland. Vote-Lady Fiya rtf in one my battles in sig. |
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