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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
01-19-06, 10:56 PM
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New to RV
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IP:
this was deep but not that entertaining. your presentation was kinda weak. imagery and word choice was nice but the rhyme scheme killed it. too simple and predictable to me. you had a great concept just felt like you coulda came with something more exciteting i had to force myself to read the rest of it. not bad but not great either. i got mixed emotions on this one
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