This was real nice, loving the multies and internal rhyming in this especially, Very well done. Only problem i got with it is that it felt a lil to complex at times, but other than that it was all good. My favorite bar was definitely the ending:

So I Drop Tears Of Ink As The Days Grow Old And Wither With Time
A Sinner For Love, Lost In The Midst Of Emotion...
......While My Thoughts Drift Behind

^^That was a good way to end it, in my opinion. Nice job man, keep it up.