Listenin' first dude has good quality, I dont like his voice..flow is decent..got too many words in the verse..but flow is decent..delivery I like..emotion is real nice...Q...I like how you came in, flow is real str8, I def like it...delivery again is very good..multis are good, hahah at thaaaattt thiiingggg.....cho...flow is improvin' alot and decent..presence ure right is tight but dubbs are a lil off...work on stop havin too many words in a line....cut out tha uneccesary words...

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can you rtf>...

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