word aint that a spontane beat. oh well beats ill...your vocals way to loud dude...flow is decent it's a little rough, you could done it a bit more smoothly. your lyrics are cool, real talk n what not. you shoulda put some vocals on the hook..short adlibs or somin like that and it'd be coo. 2nd verse is a bit better, I'm likin ya flow a little more. overall the track is decent, not really somin I'd bump. I think you coulda done a better job with it.

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