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Old 11-29-03, 07:01 PM   #16
High Class
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Vocab - pretty good, could have use a lil more
Rhyme Scheme - I was feeling the rhyme scheme
Synonyms - Did a pretty good job, remember, these are good for love raps...
Allusions - Allusions wher nice
Multies - I was feeling the multies
Topic - I Like these type of topics alot, cause I can relate to them
Neatness - Very neat, Got mad props on that on
UNderstanding - I understood everything, was feeling it, great work...
Flow - It flowed fluently the whole time, good job on that
Chorus- I was Loven the chorus, very nice rhyme scheme on that, good way to start this piece off..
Rate - 8.5 / 10

My thought - I was really feeling this hommies. You both did a very good job at constructing this collab. Also, the times im going through right now with me and my girl. I can relate to some of this alot. I was feeling it, keep this up playa's.

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