10 Lines
You Spit First
No NewB Shit Like Quotes, Caps, Etc.
I Find Out You Ask For Votes On AIM You Are DQed

surething guy........but lets make it 12-15 lines cuz 10 is a quicky and i cant express all my thoughts about u that shortly.................ok" and keep in mind that ur more likely to be asking for votes on im...... where as i dont care.....and dont have the time to be waisting my time pleeding for peoples votes on im...................ok" have a good day fella"

hey yo when u gunna check in dawg............i thought i was late cuz i didnt get a time to get online lastnight.....but u havent even replied.....so what up...............we fin to do this or wha?.............12-15 lines? answer so i can drop........and you have to drop withing 5 min after my shit too cuz u new b' like to feed off and fix ur post and shit.......so get some replies dawg

If I Was A NewB We Wouldnt Be Posting In Here You Dumbfuck And No Im Not Feeding Off Your Shit, Drop It And I Will Drop As Soon As I See You Have

Con-fue-xion bout to get lost in a intricate script
It’s obvious to indicate mentally fue xion sliped then was stripped
fuexion getting ripped..but lacks the intellect to grasp each slur I equipped
like a file being unzipped. ur getting extracted” cuz u attracted a force in me to compact it
I’ll merk u than reenacted.. grab ur face than impact it then take ur record and subtract it
All directed to making ur tryout for “wits end” get rejected.
he claims he spits sick…when he the type to die from the flue
dis kid fading away faster than the last 2 names u had in ur crew
H.I.V.. black tie…& now there back to being executives
Ur the second in ur crew I over wraped “ so executives accept-ur-gifts-
See my skill is immaculate & so accurate. u wanna spit sick? Then wait till I ejaculate
U tried to dodge my hits but –u –act-2 late-
I’ll smack the black tie” directly of ur HIV infected carcass
I over shun then pissed in ur “eye que” to show how low ur is mark is…….


……….eye que is another executive who I beat……..for those who didn’t know”

Wow He's Mexican, No Wonder Your Slept On You Cheap Tortillo
A Cheesy Dorito, But Your Distracted When I Toss This Burrito
Diggin Ya Grave, Rippin Vertabraes From Whores N Get A Back Hoe
You Wack Hoe, With A Sig Containing A Fake Unshaven Castro
No Clue, Cuz I Killed You In The Living Room As Colonel Mustard
I Can Tell My Punches Hit You Hard, Just Look At Your Structure
This Is The Lyrical Olympics, And The Judges Gave You Negatives
You Wanna Diss My Fuckin Crew, When Your Name Is Executive?
Flippin Monopoly Boxes Over And Over Is His Only Bank Roll
I'll Leave His Body With A Red Exterior Like His User Name Glow
I Prefer Watchin Marathons On Lifetime, Than Hear Your Borin Rhyme
Your A Wetback Who Buys One Room Apartments And Multiply
He Knows My Wraps Leave Him Locked Down Like Food In Saran
Kids Sig Says He Started A Never Ending War..That Never Began


P.S. I Never Was Denied From Wits End, I Have To Battle Lethargic To Prove Myself

Edit - I Mispelled A Word

opener: exec
closer: exec
punches: exec
structure: tie
vocab: exec
wordplay: tie
overall: executive


executive shit all over fue-xion in this battle

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Nice Battle

Executive - You came off slow with punches, but had some really nice word play in there. You used nice vocab, but... I feel you shoulda concentrated on the effect of your punches instead. It was an alright verse, but I have seen better from you...

Fue-xion - You also started off slow, didnt like the opener much. You had acceptable vocab, not to much and not to little. I liked how you had some personals in there. Clownin on him and shit, that was a good move. There was one line that really got my attention.

Vote - Fue-xion

Conclusion - Because of his personals, and I felt he concentrated on punches more. This is a battle, so thats why he gets my vote.
But he didnt win by much, this was a pretty hard decision...

( Return the favor hommies and make an honest vote on the battle in my sig, it would be much appriciated )

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^^Have to agree with High Class

exec you got some OK multi's but not really focused on punches...

the personals/punches by Fue made more of an impression - but Fue I was not as impressed as I expected.

both can do better, but Fue takes this with personals/punches and better structure (and that structure personal on exec locked it too)

vote = Fue

yall drop an honest vote at the link in my sig

ignorant fuck.....if ur gunna use something know it before u use it dumb fuck.......tortilla" not tortillo".......and..thats not fidel castro u fuck...thats che guevara......

^ LOL, could you please return the favor and make an honest vote on the battle in my sig. it is 4-3, so it should be somthing worth looking at. It would be much appritiated hommie...

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Executive=his verse was tite alot of multis and punches but non were like directly at fuex and it was straight good keepin up the latino nation exe.....i'm hispanic too

Fue=his verse was tite i liked the structure and shit his punches were harder felt lol all those wetback jokes lmao and the one about the apartment multiply that was nasty son i liked urs cause it had me rofl seriously

vote=fue

sorry for the freepost, but plz drop an honest vote, on this plz, its been open too long now, an i have voted onthis battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99197

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To executive.



^Nuff Said To Your Comment, And Yeah...You Would Know How To Spell Tortillo Huh?