^LMFAO. 3/5?? on my clap back you gave me like 2.5.. you dont know shit about rap you wank. this shit was wack as fuck.... ask ANYONE WITH ANY KNOWLEDGE OF RAP who song is better.... clap back or this one...... this shit is like 1/5.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95083
^there is my shit me and wondaboy clownin and shit... it was done at home cuz the studio is bein sound proofed right now... tell me do you think this 13 year old even comes close to my shit??

so from now on if you see keys post some bullshit in your thread just ignore him.... this proves you have 0 creditbillity when it comes to songs... HE DOESNT EVEN LISTEN TO THE TRACK I BET.

o and shady for one your name is shady fake as eminem wanabe... second you called someone a "nigger". im black and cant understand why you would "attempt" to join the rap game and be a stupid racist...... who the fuck founded rap nigga. do some research you little nerd..... stupid kids.

my lil brother(at age 10) had a more powerful voice then u....lol... pretty wack... i liked the beat though....

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suck, damn...dat was horrible...goddamn made me wanna vomit..

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you got tight lyrics??
YOU said:



IM NOT A BLACK CAT BUT DONT CROSS PATHS BITCH//

YOU RACIASTS SAY SHIT BUT CANT SWITCH ME PLACES//
FUCK WALKIN IN MY SHOES YOU CANT TIE MY FUCKIN LACES//

ILL FLIP THE SCRIPT LIKE ITS DOING GYMNASTICS//

BEAT ME IN YOUR DREAMS BITCH BUT RIGHT NOW YOUR AWAKE

LOL

those lyrics are corny/played/overused/and
dog if u think u tight right now...you'll never get better

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DAMN what studio did you goto cauz you sound like shit, Cauz if you had a dencent Producer and sound enginer you would not sound like trash, I think you down loaded the beat and recorded this on your computer cauz your voice and the beat dont mix in the least the sound like they are hella over dub'd with no mixing or mastering or anything. and for your voice there is a thing called EQ's cauz you need to bring down that High pitch crack, and for thous cracks you should use tone correcting softwere and any decent studio should have that. I know If I recorded you you wouldnt sound that shitty. damn so my advice is keep practing and try to rap wit a lower tone, and find a real producer somone who does not suck ass... Peace

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yo i juss came on 2 da site like a an hour ago n u was da first nigga i heard...u whack fam fa real...yo if u wanna peep some REAL shit, look in da cyphers thread unda da weapons cypher n read my drop.....holla at me, ONE.

METAMORPH.....nah cant be....LOL.... i think this is metamorph...using the n bomb rappin like a little kid....lol...from canada...nah this cant be him....lmao.....

you and your friend sound like bitches,
you have a few funny punchlines, but both your flow's are fucked up,
teh beat is pretty wack,
an you think you the shit, even pop producers wouldnt market you.

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didnt read the rest of this thread.. but those lyrics you posted.. are average at best... AT BEST..

lol...well, well.

i take it all back Shady16. i guess i was wrong, i must know nothin bout flippin script seein how all these people disagreed with wha i said.

guess its time u did up ya laces, n moved places.....away frum all us racists
dreamin or awake...cross our paths again ya best have crack'd voices n new alias's

haha...i'm so drunk.......1

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