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01-20-04, 02:34 PM | #1 | |||||||
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POLITCAL RAP(peep dis fight for legalizin weed)
IP: 052D 5433
excuse any mistake i wrote it really fast and dont feel like checkin for fuck up
please drop feedback I hate this generation Stop playa hatin kid im losin my concentration Im waitin for weed to be legal I wanna smoke it and thats how its gotta be fool I never wanna quit I wanna ripn toke da spliff Not for the high but for the gift Im lifted when I hit it I admit it its clingy but I realized I can never not hit it, I’ll risk it I’ll take the matter to the leaders We’ll see who features the illest rhyme techniques and that’s what weed does Its gift improves my methods, puts me in heaven judge Since eleven im been fightin for the right to hold back my grudge I get in trouble for what I believe in to b the key to my destiny Thinking jail will get the best they’ll never see less o’ me Politicians all better listen make weed legal I before start to go ballistic Mary jane is my doctor I hit it she heals and then I’m gifted So people all around the world boy or girl If you believe I believe we can give it wirl (chorus)So come on raise ya banner and signs its time to justify our rights Light the ganja light let it rise like day and night Despite what? That’s right, weed is harmless no need to be alarmed-man We all protect whats our can we smoke and grow off our-land It goes way back furthur yall thought It wasn’t the sixties itiots yall got it all wrong, whats goin on Don’t stand there like an idiot that’s why we write theses songs Stand up time “amen” I’ll puff dyin, I’m mary janes destined rap survivor If I were to agree that weeds bad I’d be a lyer, id rather take your parliament and set it on fire Back on track to tell a tale I never would be doin dis if it wasn’t for what im about to tell Natives for years n years used it the right way, to expand there minds away from night n day Meditate cuz dey like to pray, they did thins the righteous way It’s a gift if we use it the right way wit some thought n direction Don’t need to be smoking n packin a smith n wesson We use it to improve our ability to dreams more widely I could rappin bout the president n I’d feel like he’d be right beside me In a perplex sense of mind some would believe that, for real! But im looking for answers my self that’s I fight for it to be legal (chorus)
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01-20-04, 03:19 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 4287 3F49
this should show why weed should stay illegel.cuz its obviosly killed 90% of your brain cells.
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01-20-04, 03:44 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 399E F0FD
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..This was Weak.. |
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01-21-04, 01:44 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 052D 5433
uupin feedback........
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ExPlicitOT ~'LyRiCaLLy UnToPaBlE'~ ~FrEe AgeNt~ |
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01-21-04, 02:24 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 052D 5433
uppin feedback.............................
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01-21-04, 02:33 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 3B20 6C52
u need some work kid....your flow wasnt good and you need to make your lines more witty...
some of your lines didnt connect or ryhme either but keep elevating n all |
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01-21-04, 03:27 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 6A84 2A26
flow was off on some parts and i dont think u gave the subject all it deserves, my suggestion is.. step back and try to go at this issue from a different direction, and come with flow so people dont loose interest fast..
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