Aight im back in dis bitch, Check it out

Im not the dying kind, Unless I get this chunck of mine,
Imma keep holdin the mic, Never press rewind,
I dont like to view greatness more then one time,
So lay downt the beat and let the diamonds shine/
Brush me off, Clean me up, Tip my cup,
Cuz I always stay in and leave you wit a cough/
Never bust a gat wit a pop cuz I aint into violence,
What I really need in this life is some guidance/
Get the fuck off me,I may be white but dont take me softly,
I climbed the mountain and kept it rocky/
Kept with the music when times was hard,
Been through some ruff shit, But never got scared/

I take a good look around and what do I see,
A bunch of phoney emcees followin me/
Im drownin in G's, And swimmin in bucks,
Failin in life cuz I dont give a fuck/
If I die tomarrow then you would be glad,
Remeber your the reason I died, Aint life sad/
I could care less about school, And less about women,
It just always seems there always grinnin/

Lookie Lookie, Pickaboo, You think you crop this quick,
Cant top this spit, Cock this shit,
Walk in the dark like a topless bitch/
Man you never even nearin lyricest,
Alls you doin is hearin this,
Cuz all I do is drink beer and cryst,
Use my fist, To bust up lips,
And leavem all with lisps,
And fuck some crisps, While you eat some dicks/
So gimme a notepad and a pencil, You ask for what?
So I can make an appointment,
To steal your weed, And then roll an joint wit it,
Man I got some advise for you 3 blind mice,
Stop, Talkin, Shit, Robos gettin real frustrated,
More then Clintin did with that cuban immigrant,

I keep my shit white like plastic and crack,
Pile cats up like vlasic stacks,
A passive act, Like a white boy behind a gat/
What the fuck you thikn your gonna do,
You aint got balls, Your pussy threw and threw/

Ill get back wit my links later, What You Think???!!!????

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It wont be the same since we touchin the game,
Make the hardest thug in your crew tuck in his chane,
You think this shits a game and im bluffin for fame?
Ill squeeze off this tech till nothin remains

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M.C.BARTOK;ever since that bitch m an m came out all you dumb honkies sound the same. i got an idea for a movie you can star in its about a half man half robot whose a cop.
the name of the movie is metal cop. im russion your white im black your white i eat shit you grub on chees my rymes are tight your ass aint , the only ride you goin on is the big black dick ride you white she devil, russions dont like honky american girls who rap like m and m and are afraid of eating shit. dont be afraid it taste good it feels good ah hold up i just got paged by my boo, his name is anthony and hes a hella fine transexual lady. peace cake boy

it was an ok verse but work on ur vocab flow was good though and structure was ok
work on vocab and elevate

yo dat waz good needz work on vocab and struture but only a bit read mine