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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
Feeble | 5 | 71.43% | |
KLO! | 2 | 28.57% | |
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll |
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01-27-04, 02:59 PM | #16 |
Anti Drug=Pre-marital Sex
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IP: 2F46 BF0E
Yes I'm a newbie, but after this you'll really think I'm not.
When I drop my verse, you feel like you just been shot. weak opener.....way too basic My verbs and adverbs hit you with everything I got while your nouns stay limp in your hands like your cock. blah... Yes KLO's the name, and I'm about to explain why battling me is the worst kind of pain. your rhyme scheme is plain....no punches or personals You're just a bitch, yeah, don't even continue; you'll need a support group after the raping I'ma give you. a little better Don't even drop your shit, you might as well eat it; the nutrional value is high, you probably need it and the stains on your teeth are less humiliating than being defeated. weak closer...overall wasn't feelin this verse Klo don't try to escape, I kill kids with lines in a jolt.. I put out the light in ya head, u have no time to re volt.. nice opener...pretty creative to get the win with good character, he's methodly hoping... two wrongs dont make a right, so you need ethical motive.. not bad....too much filler though I aint readin ur verse, cuz u prolly aint rhymin, fuck.. this little bitch tried checkin in after his time was up.. okay.....it was pretty funny my lines are based in truth, givin you some pounding.. ur lines are awestricken, cuz they're all dumb founded this was pretty good dont give me this newbie shit, im already past it im just wonderin why yall like gettin ya ass whipped ? not bad closer.... overall i've seen feeble come harder but he still took this battle in every aspect, KLO you just need to look at some example verses and figure out what your doing wrong...
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01-27-04, 03:00 PM | #17 |
Anti Drug=Pre-marital Sex
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IP: 2F46 BF0E
return the favor and vote on the battle in my sig.
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01-27-04, 03:21 PM | #18 | |
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IP: 37A2 2804
WordPlay: Klo
Flow: KLO Punches: KLO Multis: none Metas:none Opener: Klo Closer: Feeble Fianl Vote: Klo Klo came much harder here. The Newb can spit. Peace.
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01-27-04, 04:24 PM | #19 | |
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IP: 544E ED5D
I polled all the valid votes, yo. upping.
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01-27-04, 04:35 PM | #20 | |
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IP: 544E ED5D
yo, upping, vote.
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01-31-04, 02:20 AM | #21 |
Original - Origin Ill
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IP: EB45 9824
up numero three
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01-31-04, 04:35 AM | #22 | |||
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IP: C1DA C961
okay here it is. Klo-good structure and flow, not very good punches thought they didh't hit too hard...Feeble-nice structure and flow, more personals more punches...
fav lines flo- Quote:
feeble- Quote:
overall feeble just came out punchin right away while flo u had more flow then punches....and need to add more personals....vote-feeble good battle ya'll peace |
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01-31-04, 05:24 AM | #23 | |
Flyweight
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IP: EB27 E87F
Flow=Tie, you both had good stuff, and both of your structures were good.
Punches=Feeble, he had a few more punches, KLO didn't really have any real punches until the very end. Personals=Tie, I didn't really see any personals. Vocab=Feeble, he had a lot higher lever of vocab in this. KLO it just seemed like he didn't really try to put more vocab in there. Over all vote=Feeble |
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