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01-31-04, 11:17 AM | #16 | |
Hooked
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IP: 7D27 0732
yey yey.............uppin(2).......................... .................................................. ...................pz
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01-31-04, 11:47 AM | #17 | |
Hooked
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IP: 7D27 0732
uppin(3).............................thx.......... .................................................. ................pz
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01-31-04, 11:51 AM | #18 | |
Rb's Teacher
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IP: EC0B 84C7
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111089
ay can call help a brotha out and vote for his battle....peace! |
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01-31-04, 12:04 PM | #19 | |
Hooked
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IP: 7D27 0732
^na man you cant post links with out a vote.............................................. .........................pz
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01-31-04, 02:48 PM | #20 | |
A cold killa
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IP: 101E D839
ok battle...
k- this was almost even, k you had some ok personals and yea punches was on key basicly why i think i like d your verse was because i didn't half to read it more then once like some, your vocab was nice to. bombz- your verse was nice, you had a better rhyme structure and the wordplay was aight but you lacked on the delivery in punches and had few personals. good verse though. vote-k
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02-01-04, 05:26 AM | #21 | |
Hooked
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IP: 7D27 0732
sweet.................................thx alot........shud be 5-0 but no1's poll voteing.........uppin(4).......................... ....pz
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02-01-04, 05:59 AM | #22 | |
Dont Push Me Of Regret It
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IP: EED2 4F8F
.:K:. simply reason beta all round.keep tryin
Vote:.:K:.
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02-01-04, 10:47 AM | #23 | |
Hooked
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IP: 7D27 0732
wak....vote.........but thx.................pll poll vote...............uppin(5)..................pz
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02-01-04, 02:26 PM | #24 | |
Middle Weight
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IP: B20F 67F7
v/ - K
Why? Harder hitting punches, more witty, enjoyed it more. Bombz verse wasn't too witty and wasn't the greatest read...some of your punches also just weren't witty. K wasn't the greatest either...but he did have some good punches...such as the red carpet one. Also, K did have more...and betetr hitting personals. Return the favoru and drop an honest vote on the battles in my signature please. Thank you. |
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02-01-04, 04:30 PM | #25 | |
Banned: Racism
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IP: D4CC BCDF
Breakdown
Bombz Yo..yo. :K:takes so much time, his pace can decay these bones, Dawg, its time to pay your wage, so often like pre-paid phones, mmmm... okay...... Allow me to cave in his rib-cage so all beef is deciest and gone, Fitted with flow you cant say I'm sick cuz 'ill' has been worn, My type of begining'll make ya' regret ya' fucking skillz were born, explain this to me, makes no sense Chills ya as I'm 'cummin', this 'fillin' wouldn't hesistate to killa cop, Grill ya' until you get hot, you work a pogo stick n' think ya hip-hop, a little hmmm but last line was dope But stop and think 'frozen' son, These threads I'm steady closing em', He got picked to batle me and niggah thinks he's the chosen one, wordplay's good, last line nice didnt understand frozen mind thing though..... Blowing blunts n' lost em, his life has cost em, as death will cross him, Fa' eva comin, I lost him, stop me? He must think he's a Trojan condomn, stretched, first line had nice muliti, last line didnt rhyme wid 1st Bombed him, stomped him, for 5 wins has harmed him, Luck couldn't help, if 'WB's' whiches came and 'charmed' him.... good closer, original .:K:. Fucka Bomb bitch...cause im sure thats the only thing your dropping, i can tell your shit was done in a rush..simular to christmas shopping, nice opener, fire bombz is simular to carpet..the way hes getting floored, K could walk into the red light district..and still wudn't get whored, okay, but sounds a lil stretched, bad structure already merked you twice...so this is just another one to my list, your like a blind felidermite boxing..all your punches mist, nice punch.....keep em comin i no this is a game of chance like poker..but ill still smash this joker(sig), what im tripping on is how bombz is a herb..but still k is doper?, umm, i think this was filler, nothin nice! 6-lines 8-lines 10? dawg it really don't matter, bombz is just another fish on a plate...enterd the chipy.. ......just about to get batterd........................... not bad...... Wordplay: Bombz Punches: .:K:. Meta’s: .:K:. Creativity: Tie Personals: .:K:. Flow: .:K:. Multi’s: Bombz Strucutre: Bombz Vote: .:K:. plees return the favor, my battles r super slept on!! links r in my sig............ |
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02-01-04, 05:17 PM | #26 | |
\/ pissing me off!!!!
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IP: 95BE 951D
bombz
Yo..yo. :K:takes so much time, his pace can decay these bones, Dawg, its time to pay your wage, so often like pre-paid phones, could of been worded better Allow me to cave in his rib-cage so all beef is deciest and gone, Fitted with flow you cant say I'm sick cuz 'ill' has been worn, My type of begining'll make ya' regret ya' fucking skillz were born, first line-nice, second line wasn't too good Chills ya as I'm 'cummin', this 'fillin' wouldn't hesistate to killa cop, grill ya' until you get hot, you work a pogo stick n' think ya hip-hop, wasn't really feelin this But stop and think 'frozen' son, These threads I'm steady closing em', He got picked to batle me and niggah thinks he's the chosen one, not direct Blowing blunts n' lost em, his life has cost em, as death will cross him, Fa' eva comin, I lost him, stop me? He must think he's a Trojan condomn, nice multies, not too bad Bombed him, stomped him, for 5 wins has harmed him, Luck couldn't help, if 'WB's' whiches came and 'charmed' him.... second line was nice, first was ok you came real weak, i seen you come harder than this, your punches hardly git. .:K:. Fucka Bomb bitch...cause im sure thats the only thing your dropping, i can tell your shit was done in a rush..simular to christmas shopping, not too bad, flow was off a lil bit. bombz is simular to carpet..the way hes getting flored, K could walk into the red light district..and still wudn't get whored, nice, second line a lil stretched already merked you twice...so this is just another one to my list, your like a blind felidermite boxing..all your punches mist, nice punch i no this is a game of chance like poker..but ill still smash this joker(sig), what im tripping on is how bombz is a herb..but still k is doper?, second line was filler, pretty weak 6-lines 8-lines 10? dawg it really don't matter, bombz is just another fish on a plate...enterd the chipy.. ......just about to get batterd........................... lol, im english, i think most english peeps have used the fish/battered line your punches hit, no real killers, but some nice wordplay!! vote- .:k:. harder hitting punches, an better wordplay!!
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