SSSSSSSSSStop........
Hmmm..

Oh, yea now I remember
I can't rap cause I look like John Denver
I'm perma-white like an Alaskan december
but the forshadowing of raps biggest contender
Ring the bell It's the last round for Mc's
who test their skills against these
Please, believe I don't mean to hurt you
but your new name is sandy brownie
cause in the desert I'll dessert you
get it, that's a joke if you missed it

i'm a newbie too and this is my first post and, it would be better if you fixed the end of ur intro, otherwise its cool