There were cops banging on the door
The person you hated was on the floor
You had a gun and it was clicked
The person flinched
What would you do?
What would you do?

Don’t you remember man?
This guy sent you down the can
For something you didn’t do
He’s trying to play you like a fool
Just shoot his damn head off
Just pretend the noise is a loud cough
Don’t leave any evidence though
Or you will spend another 10 years, oh no
Look man, there’s a window
Use it man escape without any trace
That guy there, is a big disgrace

Look man, lets think here
If you go to jail again no one will care
You will lose the trust of your family and friends
You will be on a dead end
You will have nowhere to go
All this because you want to shoot your foe?
Just reconsider man
Just jump out the window and run man
Forget that guy
If he got arrested he will just lie
There isn’t no way your going to survive
Just run away now before the cops arrive
They are close to opening the door
Get out now! Before it’s too late
Or this will be the end of your fate.

There were cops banging on the door
The person you hated was on the floor
You had a gun and it was clicked
The person flinched
What would you do?
What would you do?

The cops have surrounded the window
It’s too late to go now
Remember how you went down for 10 long years?
You had to confront all your fears
All those nights on your own
All those tears you have shown
All those times you nearly broke down
All those people being released into town
With you just sitting there
All those people treating you like you wasn’t here
You can’t even see you own son
Because this bastard said you had a gun
Look at the S.O.B cry
Just shoot him! You ask why?
He’s made your life a living hell
Now just send the bastard to hell
One more knock on the door and the cops are in
Don’t worry man, its not a sin
JUST SHOOT HIM! NOW!

BANG!

The cops got in the door
They saw a dead body on the floor
They had arrested you
Nobody had knew
What would you have done?
What would you have done?

Any Responses?

dat was deep kid dat was hott



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dont fuk wit me hahaha

Thanks for that

Can anyone else Reply? thanks

it was an open poem... telling exactly what you wanted to say... next time try to
use a larger vocabulary, incorperate so words you wouldnt normally think to use
also add some metaphors... they add imagery to the mind and really get the
reader into what you wrote... it was a str8 piece tho.. keep writing

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