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02-09-04, 07:21 PM
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Lust Vs. Testament
IP: B0AD 7156
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10 Lines Due Tomorrow Midnight Get In Tonight Or Try
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02-09-04, 07:21 PM
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Banned
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IP: B82A ECCD
yo both drop this shit in 45 mins aight?
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02-09-04, 07:24 PM
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IP: B0AD 7156
Word, Checking In.....................Try To Get It In Earliest Possible Tho
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02-09-04, 07:25 PM
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Banned
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IP: B82A ECCD
ight checkign in
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02-09-04, 08:28 PM
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IP: B0AD 7156
Dogg, Dont State The Obivious, Cuz I Already..
..Know.. No Need To Tell Me That I'll Quote:
Im Blowing Away Lust, As If My Punches Were Winds Of.. ..Gust.. Cuz He Has Sexual Desire, You Getting Stomped On Like Earths.. ..Crust!.. Punches Hittin You Hard, Nother' Knock Out, Thats Right, Im.. ..Correct.. Dont Battle Me, Jus Duck, You Can Post When Your Punches.. ..Connect!.. I Woulda Had This Up As A 2 Minute Key, But RB Went.. ..Down.. Im Shattering This Kid, His Punches Keep Missing.. ..Around And Around.. This Is A Half Assed Verse, Wouldnt Be Surprised If You.. ..Won.. Your Not Worth 3 Credits, So I'll Lie To Make Happy.. ..This Was Only For Fun!.. Actually It Wasnt But Lie Happy, Get IT?
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02-09-04, 08:29 PM
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Banned
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IP: B82A ECCD
your the replica nigga on the block who claims he tight but really hes herendous
im distinct you'll never find a MC more tremendous i gotta fetish for herbin nitches like you ur the old testament , IM THE NEW im hear to try and exstinct u like they did wit the jews you aint gunna beat me with ur played out remarks i'll put a mussel on ur ass like they do with dogs who barks put ur ass on the hush, dont pout i flow like a water spout, ill shread your ass wit out a doubt the lines i spit are nothing shy of perfect fuck this im out |
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02-09-04, 08:30 PM
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Banned
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IP: B82A ECCD
nitches = bitches my bad
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02-09-04, 08:31 PM
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IP: B0AD 7156
Dogg, Dont State The Obivious, Cuz I Already..
..Know.. No Need To Tell Me That I'll Quote:
Im Blowing Away Lust, As If My Punches Were Winds Of.. ..Gust.. Cuz He Has Sexual Desire*, You Getting Stomped On Like Earths.. ..Crust!.. Punches Hittin You Hard, Nother' Knock Out, Thats Right, Im.. ..Correct.. Dont Battle Me, Jus Duck, You Can Post When Your Punches.. ..Connect!.. I Woulda Had This Up As A 2 Minute Key, But RB Went.. ..Down.. Im Shattering This Kid, His Punches Keep Going*.. ..Around And Around.. This Is A Half Assed Verse, Wouldnt Be Surprised If You.. ..Won.. Your Not Worth 3 Credits**, So I'll Lie To Make Happy.. ..This Was Only For Fun!.. Actually It Wasnt But Lie Happy, Get IT? * = Corrections *= Lust= Sexual Desire **= 3 Credits A Battle Correction Completed And I Fixed The Quote Thing
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02-09-04, 09:02 PM
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Banned
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IP: B82A ECCD
uppin for votes
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02-09-04, 09:21 PM
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Free Agent.
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IP: B0AD 7156
Uppin For Win.............................................
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02-10-04, 04:16 PM
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Free Agent.
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IP: B0AD 7156
Up................................................ .......
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02-10-04, 04:30 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: B20F 67F7
half-assed battle lmao. Even tho both of ya came crappy...my vote goes to Ill Testament.
why? Better punches and better verse overall. I like dat structure too...really highlights the punchlines. But anyways...even tho both had sum played concepts for their punchlines...atleast Ill Testament's were more creative and did hit harder. Lust...you came ok...but no disses that really made me go "dammm" tho. Anyways... v/ - Ill Testament |
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02-10-04, 04:37 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 9588 E886
oh i forgot...vote here. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113306
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02-10-04, 08:16 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: DCCF E86A
aight this was pretty simple even though both verses were half-assed...
Flow-IT Multis-IT Vocab-lust Punches-IT Wordplay-IT Structure-tie (both choppy) Personals-IT aight so both can improved their structure...Lust you just need more better personals as well as multis...put them in whenever you can you know...definately learn how to use wordplay....you used like 2 "big" words...haha n they werent the greatest vocab...werent the greatest spelled either...plus hit hikm with punches period...i saw no punches that could touch anyone anytime...both elevate...aight...half-assed battle... vote- IT
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02-10-04, 08:40 PM
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IP: 2A83 F7CE
alright, well, ill, kinda weak verse for you, but not awful, some pretty good lines in there, good wordplay and creativity.
lust at first you came harder that ill, but then you lost it and your verses just got bad --ur the old testament , IM THE NEW pretty-- good line there but after that it got pretty terrible. vote-testament |
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