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02-11-04, 09:13 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Slavery
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A white-man's tale over a blackman's kingdom decay
Tailored mind filled foolery, and painful slavery King that reigned overturned to fit a white new suit Where white is the angel and black is the witch Continent invaded divided and inter-enmity created A history desecrated, black societies destoryed Replaced by black pupet amputating his own limp Black man with a painted face singing a white song Greed and corruption embraced imported by whites The black victims of hate, of failed black knights The black land devasted by the black prostitutes The mental prostitutes brained by the white devils Foolish blacks humbled by the white lie of schools What makes or destroys a kingdom is the failure to control.
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02-11-04, 11:19 PM | #2 | |||
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Ayoo aesthetic me illspitta4life nice stuff rite here. Real good emotion in it and thats the main part of poetry. I dont like critisizing poems cuz bein good aint what it's about. All about expression peace.
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02-12-04, 05:54 PM | #3 | ||||
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tha topic is gud, the imagery is mild and theres not alotta feelin here, but it however was a gud read
.......fav part...... A white-man's tale over a blackman's kingdom decay Tailored mind filled foolery, and painful slavery King that reigned overturned to fit a white new suit Where white is the angel and black is the witch the line that says "Where the white is angel and the black is witch" was so true keep droppin return tha favor ....bless
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02-12-04, 05:56 PM | #4 | |||||||
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Apreciate it.....
Wun
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02-12-04, 08:09 PM | #5 | |||||||
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You have an amazing way with words. You gave good imagery and depth to a piece with much emotion using simple terms and vague wording. Very well done....
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02-12-04, 08:20 PM | #6 | |||||||
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who the fuck is this whack ass with my name and quote?
homie you need to lose this shit and make matters worse you stole my sig quote.. fuck outta here you puttin Aes to shame and kilkl ''Wun'' shit thats even gayer prepare to be whored daily |
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02-12-04, 08:31 PM | #7 | |||||||
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this is whack, and trust kid ill be waiting for you to show your face
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02-13-04, 03:26 PM | #8 | |||||||
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werd i was juz gonna ask that...cuz i saw ur post on UF i dunno name if ripped is common but the quote...now thas weird....n e ways...not to be off topic but good piece but seemed to be a lil weak in imagry but otha then that on tap
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02-13-04, 06:24 PM | #9 | |||||||
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KIds i got this name from a homey.....and i can murder you wit 1 verse...Where ever u from...i dont really give a fucc.....U born wit the name or somethin....weaklink.....and count on that.....ama get a new name....cuz some fool comes out nowhere bullshittin...
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02-13-04, 07:54 PM | #10 | |||||||
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dont let dat dude make u change yo name he jus bullshitt cause yo poem was hott dats all playa holla
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02-13-04, 10:02 PM | #11 | |||||||
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lol@ you changin your name, your location and you're quote...fucknig herb if i didnt say anything you would have kept being me....tsk tsk
keep the name(im not buggin bout that so much) lose the ''tm'' though but good looks on not trying to be Aes anymore,,,yeah good poem and you can never see Aes in text, got a mic perhaps? |
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02-17-04, 09:10 PM | #12 | |||||||
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Kido^^^the name wont do u anyshit is the skill .....work on that...lol
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