10-15 lines max
No crew votes d/r
no hate votes..no biting feeding.
or recycling..

Sense U need more hours to drop iLL..it's Ur choice..U have an hour to drop..
or 2 hours if U need it..Ur choice...
and sense U brought it up U drop first...
remeber to choose how many hours 1 or 2..and it starts once u check in..

Get merked

fuck 16 lines , ill key one for u right now


battle me? my skills are endless, relentless...i got more "bars" than jailed up fences//
the mic menace, acting like Texas about to "serve" Chemist a death "sentence"///
my spits wetness will soak this MC until hes "washed up"//
bio chemist is a fraud, hes only a bluff///
like the chemical weapons in Iraq, that never popped up//
so you battle online, i dont give respect just cause you win belts///
and i dont need biological weapons to make this kids skin melt///
im devilish, here to" bomb" on these terrorists when i drop it///
then torture their "chemist" tied up in his office///
then make him read my lyrics contents so his eyes pop outta his sockets//
fucked up your optics, ill transmit a virus though kleenex///
infect his lines with diseases, then tell him to eat it///
this is my first time seeing a BIO CHEMIST, who doesnt know how to be "sick"////
i joined rap battles, and like a stray "kat", people showed me no love//
my inks blood, cause rap is the only thing that i think of//
and whenever someone says bio chemist, i always think DUD//
i got this thug running, to me its just funny///
im gonna shut him down like a chemist without any funding///
good thing you have a labratory, cause your gonna need nurse care////
imma fry this scientist with my mic, till he looks like Eintstein with worse hair

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GangGreen

"It aint all about economy///So the fact that all these wack MC's is makin G's dont bother me///Honestly, my number one policy is quality"

Ur Gay when It comes to lyrics, Anal to me and -Trapt-
This proves U try to do -Re Dic Us- (ridiculous) moves now how gay is that…
Battle me Fear is a Must On the same Level..??
I’ll kill U in the next episode so we can -See Equal- (Squeal)…
Unwritten so U don’t script any Hazard…
Read his sig “Gay n Green” (Gang Green) this Leprechaun proved he’s fagot
After this battle U won’t have a mouth To breathe Threw,
Chemically thrust moves vanishing Ur vocals..
With Ur whack ranks and gay style Ur new alias is -Diss Purse-
U proved Ur a newbie using 16 lines, Follow the rules How illiterate,
Even if I -Clowned Ur scripts- U still wouldn’t be an -Insane Joker Lyricist-


11 lines of true punches…
And U broke the rules..

i never agreed to ur rules....so how did i break them LOL

well first off nice drop

but being an MC doesnt mean spittng as many punches as u can......(oh yea that see-equal, sequal line is played out"




Read his sig ?Gay n Green? (Gang Green) this Leprechaun proved he?s fagot- SICK





good battle , but your verse didnt touch me or my pride next tmie come at me but still props


uppin 4 votes

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GangGreen

"It aint all about economy///So the fact that all these wack MC's is makin G's dont bother me///Honestly, my number one policy is quality"

I know my verse didn’t touch yours I ripped U…
U know why

Because Of punches and personals…That’s what wins battles
And by battling me that’s technically stating that U agree with the
Rules..
Ur good at ciphering I guess …as for battling there is a difference..
No more freespoting
Uppin for votes…

hey can ya'll vote on this?I need a few more posts before I can vote but I promise I'll suscribe to this thread and vote when I can!

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VOTE ON THIS PLEASE>>>HOT SHIT!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...642#post1184642
BANG BITCH!

unwritten hazard - ur structure was fuckin horrible.......that made ur flow fall off drastically.......vocab was pretty good........nice multis......wordplay was tight.......punches were ok........personals were aight......

bio chemist - structure was good.........flow was on target........vocab was ok..........some of the multis were good........wordplay was ok........punches connected........good personals.........

breakdown -
structure - bio
flow - bio
vocab - unwritten
multis - unwritten
wordplay - unwritten
punches - bio
personals - bio

conclusion - bio chemist takes this in structure, flow, and more importantly punches and personals so he gets my vote........

VOTE - BIO CHEMIST

yo since i took the time to leave my honest feedback id appreciate if u two did the same.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114139

thanx.........

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thanks for the vote and honesty

but seriously, bio chemist's punches were lame..lol

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GangGreen

"It aint all about economy///So the fact that all these wack MC's is makin G's dont bother me///Honestly, my number one policy is quality"

No they weren’t and stop freeposting….
U just admit it yourself my punches were good
Now you are contradicting Urself..which proves
Ur just a fraudulent lyricist…

Uppin Votes

Lets go quick votes..
I voted on enough battles this should not be slept on lets go..

Uppin
up for votes votes and more votes....stop sleeping...*

yo the link that i posted above already got closed, so if u could return the favor here itd be appreciated......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114227

thanx.........

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LOL i dont knwo what's goin on here... n noone better call me a noob or tell me i dont know what im talking about.... I think unwritten hazard took this battle...

Your right ... he didnt have a lot of direct hits ... he had a few nice lines tho .... The structure wasnt so fucked up i couldnt read it, coulda been fixed but his shit flowed fine...

"battle me? my skills are endless, relentless...i got more "bars" than jailed up fences//
the mic menace, acting like Texas about to "serve" Chemist a death "sentence"///"

^^ Nice multis n wordplay

"good thing you have a labratory, cause your gonna need nurse care////
imma fry this scientist with my mic, till he looks like Eintstein with worse hair"

^^ Kinda funny - real visual, good imagery


I really just didn't like Bio Chemists verse...

the first line was actually a pretty decent punch:

"Ur Gay when It comes to lyrics, Anal to me and -Trapt-
This proves U try to do -Re Dic Us- (ridiculous) moves now how gay is that… "

"Battle me Fear is a Must On the same Level..??
I’ll kill U in the next episode so we can -See Equal- (Squeal)…"

^^ Dont like this one

"Unwritten so U don’t script any Hazard…
Read his sig “Gay n Green” (Gang Green) this Leprechaun proved he’s fagot "

^^ creative wordplay ... punch was just ok ... hazard n faggot seem a lil too forced

"After this battle U won’t have a mouth To breathe Threw,
Chemically thrust moves vanishing Ur vocals..
With Ur whack ranks and gay style Ur new alias is -Diss Purse"

^^ Wtf is all this??

"U proved Ur a newbie using 16 lines, Follow the rules How illiterate,
Even if I -Clowned Ur scripts- U still wouldn’t be an -Insane Joker Lyricist-"

^^ Ok line but how is that a punch ...i get what youre saying but i just dont see how it's effective



All in all you had a couple decent punches, some decent wordplay... flow was ok...



This was Hazards worst filler crap...

"im devilish, here to" bomb" on these terrorists when i drop it///
then torture their "chemist" tied up in his office///
then make him read my lyrics contents so his eyes pop outta his sockets//
fucked up your optics, ill transmit a virus though kleenex///
infect his lines with diseases, then tell him to eat it///
this is my first time seeing a BIO CHEMIST, who doesnt know how to be "sick"////
i joined rap battles, and like a stray "kat", people showed me no love//
my inks blood, cause rap is the only thing that i think of//
and whenever someone says bio chemist, i always think DUD//"


But i really liked his first line and some of the other stuff decent until ^^ that crap...


It's almost a tie battle... i think Bio Chemist came weak... Hazard should work on less filler... but he managed to pull it off by a hair... I might be the only one who sees it this way but i think Unwritten Hazard got this....

PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR AND DROP AND HONEST VOTE ON ONE OF MY BATTLES...

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Intoxicated vs John

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knew I should of put no newbie votes
Hazard if everyone reads went way over the
excepted mount of lines


whatever....
uppin