aight.........the other thread wasn't set up right so I'mma post the verses in here.................

wait.. just 16 lines
first to 5
5-0 ko

mcCraken's VERSE!!!!!!

aright yo i flow nonstop like a motherfucken radio
you rhyme like a scratched cd, so for you its not ~ok to flow~
you only get pussy if you pay or rape ho
cuz you're SLOW AND STUPID... like using a ~rake in snow~

I chew you like a dog.... who knew id be raw?
ME! and thats all that matters when youre new to this all
oh you'd want to brawl? i take a power tool to your jaw
its like tryouts bitch, but dont assume you'll be called

ayo everytime i drop shit its hott bitch, like the tropics
bet lets NOT get off the topic, your ~not shit~
you got that? im crazier than that CAT wit the ~top hat~
like an anarexic your NOT PHAT, damn right i ~drop hot raps~!!

and its amazingly crazy to see this lady act masculine
raw prevails over wack, so its ~basically my task to win~
now pass the jin, and i still slice you fast and quick
your like an ~ass! get kicked~ or just an EVRLASTING DICK!!

****YOUR VERSE'LL BE KINDA SHAKY SO IMA STEADY THE RIDE,
LIKE BIGGIE YOUR ~READY TO DIE~ WHEN YOUR BODY AND MY ~MACHETTI'S COLLIDE~!!!! whaaaaat

MY VERSE

aight...........check it

i dont need-gatz,belive my text will simply leave you with your knees-capped/
i kno your "asian", so you mean it litteral when you say you "eat-cats"/<~~~~haha
when im ragin ill flip, if you cash all the chin-checks im givin you, id be making you rich/
plus i'm a child molestor in battles . . . just look at how I'm raping this kid/
bitches these days, so mcCRACKEN hold heat? dawg ill leave you and your crew frozen/
spittin like you think you a “gift”, fuck it bitch ill “rip you open”/
ill give you a sneak-view, blast through like your fake ass is see-thru/
like battling the "invisible" man, when it comes to skills, “i don't see you”/
i break spines, he wouldnt match rymes with me if he made mines/
cause mcCRACKEN’s like a game of "four square" with all those played lines/
he wont do "big things" if he had a "dick pump", confessing-his-mind-state/
the time awaits, mcCRACKEN never seen who he's messing with, like a contestant-on-blind-date/
your super soaker making-me-wet, doesent mean that you can "spray-with-the-best"/
you'll pay-for-your-threats, like "dolphins", I got you "running-away-from-the-nets"/-(hope you get it)

aight.........vote now.................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Umm MC your verse was one of the better one's I have seen on here.....I didn't understand some of your punches though....like



^^^^Punchline didn't make sense like that.................

Like this



^^^pretty sick man...................nice multies................verse......7.5/10

Snyper...........your verse was constant fire...............



^^^^that was a crazy opener........didn't think that you could keep you verse that strong throughout............................then I read...........



^^^^Crazy nice man................8.5/10

MC...your verse started out weak, but ended strong...........while SnypeR's verse was strong throughout............

thanx for the breakdown TOoN..........................

uppin............................................. ...............

McCracken-> Had a nice flow, had a few good hits. Not much impressed though by his wordplay or most of his lines. It was hard, but not that hard. kinda catch my drift here?
Snyper-> Your verse was non-stop beat the hell outta him. lol. I liked your flow and you had some ill-ass punches. You had nice wordplay and metas.

VOTE-> Snyper. McCracken, keep writing. You have the skillz you just gotta put it all together.

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Yeah SnypeR........represent.......................

uhhhh sounds li,em theres a little dick sucking going on...but its straight whatver

aight i shouldnt have to even write this cuz its so obvious that sniper got him all the way...but sniper had betta everythin good punches good meta4s good everything..
i like your style of rappin its crazy but clean at the same time...8/10

mc you was aight for a lil thin you was gettin boring.....you should have neva even battled him...but you was alrite you could have done betta i hope...ypou alot of work on your battles....4/10

may the bets man win

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my MYSPACE is Better than Yours

I don't d.r............and you know that Snyper got you in this.....I explained my vote clearly............so don't even try that...........

uppin............................................. ................

his shit was ill its just when 2 crew members both praise him like a mother fucker and give me a 4 outta 10.. whoa donno bout that