8-15 bars
usual rules
verses due tonight at 10 central

checkin in..............and I'm Eastern time dawg...you don't need that long do you?

checkin in, nevermind den ..... 10 eastern watever, ima make mine quick, peace

ima rip dis bitches adam's apple out, throw it ta ma dogs an see if they like the juice,
cuz bitches with played-out names like "snyper" belong in church, hittin them high notes,
singin in "a major", wit feminious voices, never heard of ya before but i can see yur drawn by gay-forces,
your fuckin crews name is "tray six", i gotta catch-phrase for u, "We rape sheep"
only play ull ever get~ tryin ta get props on a message board, wit fake metaphors u stole from em's vocal chords,
but keep elevatin, ure only undefeated because u battled hoes, steppin over the toes of "amatuers"
further more, i'll levatate you ass, like a ghost-hosue wit "hot" furniture,
burnin ya wit 3rd degrees, tat type ish leaves scarz, all ya over hands and jaw,
ull be cryin like a bitch who got stepped on, an all bones in his body crushed,
u gotta be a leprachaun, ta magically wish ya ass a body mesh, fresh of the press,
snyper got raped and murdered, like a 13 year old girl who got taped and jiz-blurred,
choked til she cudnt scream for "toon" world, cuz dats the only place "she"(Snyper) likes getting "fooled" in.

Yo check-it..................

Fight-me-through and just surrender...it's what you'll likely-do/
My punches get lighted-too and "burn this asshole" like spicy-food/
S-killz? What is this? Why do you talk so gay?/
You be a Popey "hurricane" and still not "blow-me-away"/

You rap?-no...you wack-though...I'll rip ya face with a back-hoe/
You got mad when You couldn't use "terror squads" impersonating fat-joe/
Strain-to-ponder but no matter what you're still a labeled-goner/
No need to state-it-longer...Enuff... could be brides best friend...but never "made-of-honor"/

Hey-I'm-stronger,.... so why don't you just stick to holes-in-asses/
Ya fake no name crew gets swallowed-in-masses,/
you couldn't make me "look bad" if ya stole-my-glasses/
You're not-gonna-win so cease trying cuz I'm not gonna say stop-it-again/
You remind me of a good hand of poker...you gettin "dropped-for-the-win"/

Grabbed my glock and cocked-it-again till it peels-at-domes/
I beat you till you were in "critical condition" so you could "feel-at-home"/
The "arrow points" to this developed-hater, so it easy to "TELL-I'M-GREATER"/*1*
You won't want to show-in-town...Enuff’s "goin-down" like elevators/
I smell-a-traitor...wasn't EC only down-with-skill?/

pushed submit too soon.................wasn't finished.............

Fight-me-through and just surrender...it's what you'll likely-do/
My punches get lighted-too and "burn this asshole" like spicy-food/
D-Meth? What is this? Why do you talk so gay?/
You be a Popey "hurricane" and still not "blow-me-away"/

You rap?-no...you wack-though...I'll rip ya face with a back-hoe/
You got mad when You couldn't use "terror squads" impersonating fat-joe/
Strain-to-ponder but no matter what you're still a labeled-goner/
No need to state-it-longer...Meth... could be brides best friend...but never "made-of-honor"/

Hey-I'm-stronger,.... so why don't you just stick to holes-in-asses/
Ya fake no name crew gets swallowed-in-masses,/
you couldn't make me "look bad" if ya stole-my-glasses/
You're not-gonna-win so cease trying cuz I'm not gonna say stop-it-again/
You remind me of a good hand of poker...you gettin "dropped-for-the-win"/

Grabbed my glock and cocked-it-again till it peels-at-domes/
I beat you till you were in "critical condition" so you could "feel-at-home"/
The "arrow points" to this developed-hater, so it easy to "TELL-I'M-GREATER"/*1*
You won't want to show-in-town...Meth "goin-down" like elevators/
I smell-a-traitor...wasn't EC only down-with-skill?/

You shoot blanks and end up like "rich alchoholics"...still got a round-to-fill/
I found-a-kill so why not give Meth competition alleviation/
I hold depreciation cus ya punches are "MT" like mountain abbreviations/*2*
You're not-blazin..you better hope I'm off on my drop-placement/
But this mexican better guess-again...like chinese sex...this was all "cock-asian"/*3*

I'm sick-in-this and my words bring all terrific-hits/
D-Meth is-a-bitch...the closest he'll get to "mics" is his birth certificate/*4*
I'm limit-less with sentences...and I'm gettin sick of killz gay-snarl/
So I'll just finish em now...and you "never saw me cummin" like sex with Ray-Charles/*5*

..:::Expiations:::..
*1* - You know in math...equal or lesser signs....the arrow points to the lesser one...so it was easy to see I'm greater.....

*2* - The abbreviation for Mountain is "mt." mt=empty

*3* - cock-asian + caucasian (white people)
*4* - If his name was Mike it would be on his birth certificate

*5* - Ray Charles is blind...never saw me cummin...get it

Sorry about double postin........I messed up..........I wasn't finished and pushed submit...........the reason that the names are messed up cause I was battleing that lat named enuff........and got ya'll confused cause I had to post so quick..........

i'm gonna give this one to Snyper. Wait no i'm not. I'm kinda insulted by the lyrical explanation given at the bottom...if the audience can't comprehend it then they can't comprehend it. What kinda real MC explains himself after he spits on stage or record??? I don't think the net should be any different. No vote here..don't think I quite know how.

UBR

Oh, and I know already.....
Do what you gotta do.

Yes i would have to agree unborn this is truly sad! No offence but if pepole feel ur flow then no need for explinationz

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Hmm looks like theres some battles in here worth reading
Unborn-

"only play ull ever get~ tryin ta get props on a message board, wit fake metaphors u stole from em's vocal chords" haha dayum that wuznt anythign special or something but it applied so much to snype's verse it cracked me up

Snyper-
"Grabbed my glock and cocked-it-again till it peels-at-domes/
I beat you till you were in "critical condition" so you could "feel-at-home"/
The "arrow points" to this developed-hater, so it easy to "TELL-I'M-GREATER"/*1*
You won't want to show-in-town...Meth "goin-down" like elevators/
I smell-a-traitor...wasn't EC only down-with-skill?/"

alot of wordplay, made it kinda confusing, but still this cat's verse was on a higher level, greater degree of difficulty, better rhymes, albiet confusing punches.

close battle, i give it to Snyper

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yo i was fellin snyper man he had a really nice flow i gve him a 9/10
D-Meth as for u i didn't even fell your flow u had some puches other than that
oh and a little bit of structure that about it it just suckes 6/10
you already now who won this battle

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i just mit murk u next

I'm given this one to snyper but only cause it was that much better. I personally don't feel that flow needs explenations obviously if you feel the need to explain your shit then, chances are your not comming with clear punches. Anyways, it was a good drop obviously Snyper has skill as I know I have seen before. D- meth nice try maybe stick to newbie's thought people that haven't really battles before,' wait a mintues like myself!! Set it up. LOL

Yoh its obvious synper won this battle an why is it sooo bad to try an explain punches...it just makes it clearer for the person reading to understand since text battles are about metaphors and wordplay and ish liek that...i see where yah commin from if it was an audio battle cuz thats a different story...its all about flow and the punchlines have to be understandable ryte after you spit em so its a different case...but i think its bettah to explain punchlines in text battles...but only emcees that have ability to produce shit that has reason to be explained wud kno whut im sayin....

Vote:Synper

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