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yo drop whenever...

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1 Corinthians 1:19 -

For it is written, (GOD THEN SPOKE) "I WILL DESTROY THE WISDOM OF THE WISE, AND THE CLEVERNESS OF THE CLEVER I WILL SET ASIDE."

yo rolling deep can u vote on these 2 battles of mine please....
quickpunch vs marvolous(bannishment battle loser leaves the board)
quickpunch vs big'n

i'll come back here 2 vote once uve both droped...so in the mean time can yal vote on those 2 battles...thanks

.... quickpunch its all good tho... and rollin thought u would b on w/e im droppin

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1 Corinthians 1:19 -

For it is written, (GOD THEN SPOKE) "I WILL DESTROY THE WISDOM OF THE WISE, AND THE CLEVERNESS OF THE CLEVER I WILL SET ASIDE."

How can u be a clique in yourself nigga 'roll deep'/
that can't be when I don't see 'any G's...'/
w/e the crime rate increase/
yall see'n 'more blood' than the 'red sea'/
nigga 'dread. this. new. substance'/
This is my stage and I
got this audience laughin at you at ya own expense/
If i gave 'bitches pics' they lose breath from this
'rap. game. crown. prince'/
I say without reluctance/
rollin deep U face me wit 'no squad'?
when I got demons behind me on a 'rampage wit no sense'/
comin wit 'pure instinct' like 'beasts'/
Da Fuck u lookin at?
lemme 'spit on ya face' so my 'rhymes feast'/
contact wit me? nigga be careful who your eye meets/
U like a prostitute i aint gotta 'spit game just to fuck you'/
drive by his bus route/
show Roll deep and his friend chuck what this tuck do/
'dispense' on this nigga from 'cleveland' to 'penn state'
wit 'drop tops'/
lyrically rockin this clit and it don't stop/

25 minute spit drop whenever deep

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1 Corinthians 1:19 -

For it is written, (GOD THEN SPOKE) "I WILL DESTROY THE WISDOM OF THE WISE, AND THE CLEVERNESS OF THE CLEVER I WILL SET ASIDE."

good spit, can you hit this battle up for me bud, I alrdy won once but it came back cuz one vote got D'Qed so vote on that and I will vote here when its ova wit.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118203

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TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE

up... even tho the nigga aint on

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1 Corinthians 1:19 -

For it is written, (GOD THEN SPOKE) "I WILL DESTROY THE WISDOM OF THE WISE, AND THE CLEVERNESS OF THE CLEVER I WILL SET ASIDE."

Atticus i just sit back and laugh at all that you spit...//
dont worry i wont feed off yours..because i dont bite pieces of shit//

i would spend more time..if i had to guard my position//
but your wack commit suicide then you might finnaly get some recognition//

Your offense is hittin as hard as flickin peas when there mushy//
like i said i would put up some defense if you werent such as pussy//

Im about take this bitch to the ammo store to refuel his rap//
because right now your oily and about as hot as a piece of crap//

its people like you who give a meaning to the word arrogance//
i can be cocky because ill tell you strait..you have no chance Atticus//

your whole name sounds like your something from macbeth//
boilin in my cauldron and your about 2 be sent to yo death//

i would give you some better disses if i felt i had the time//
but this ones over..leave site..ur plain wack...and you cant fuckin ryhme//

..................................uppin........... ..................................................

come on man im lookin to end this shit quick............................................. ...........

aight rollin deep took this one basically because i could understand his and i found it hard to flow wit atticus and ths shit didnt really ryhme all tha good..
rollins opener was a decent opener and some of the punchlines was hot i didnt realy feel any of atticus's...

Vote:Rollin_Deep

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

aight rollin got this one..atticus you really need to work on your structure because its hard as fuck to understand...you would probably be a great deal better if you worked on that and ryhmed abit more....
rollin basically had hotter punchlines and flowed alot better....

Vote:Rollin

............................................uppin. .................................................. 3 more and this bitch i KO'd.............................................. .uppiinnnnnnnnnn

............................................uppin. ..................................................

both were wack....
Rollin_Deep:
Punches:6/10..some hard others a bit played...
Flow:3/10..lines were to long...
Wordplay:..5/10...not bad for a newb but use longer words...
Structure:3/10..gen lines to long...
Vocab:5/10....some nice words
Personals:1/10..none realy efevetive
Overall...5/10
Aittuss:
Punches:5/10...some week tho...siome hiting hard..
Flow: 7/10...keep the lines at a gud legnth
Wordplay:5/10....use longer words dawg..
Structure:...7/10....much better...kept the lines da same lenght
Vocab:4/10....needs work
Personals:...3/10..agen not realy good..
Overall..6/10
v/atticus

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