aiight lets go

10 lines
blind spit
no d/r,cv or biting
good luck
no feedin if someone finishes first
good luck

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KiLlAh BwOy

aight playa this me checkin in
good luck homey!!

checkin in
good luck.................................

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KiLlAh BwOy

check it killa this is my spit

I’m a Lyrical Leader makin me the king of killah’s destruction//
His spit’s gonna be ready-made like a rehearsed production//
Ure crew is full of hoes, I put all u bitches to work//
If ure crew was the ‘Enterprise’ I’d be fuckin ‘Captain Kirk’//
I cud be considered OutKast cuz my shit is ‘So Fresh & So Clean’// (OutKast song)
Ure shit is ripped and dirty I polish it with my Mr. Sheen//
U shud quit right now cuz my shit u’ll never surpass//
U aint got no skillz, I cud beat u rappin out my ass//
This bwoy don’t know rap, I gave him Eminem tickets for free but//
He said Eminem…which one, chocolate or peanut??//

PEACE!!
no feedin off my verse remember playa!!

You callin' the police?...........Lines will beat you down like Rodney King......./
Don't watch TV.........Rhymes'll pop through ya Television like-the-ring......../
Lines can't harm me....My Verse affects this kid like the Luthar king speech.../
I spit holy.......'Cause if I got somethin' to say I let my nine preach....../
You like busta rhymes?.....I'll "break ya neck" leave your head hangin....../
Bust-my-nine....You tryna fuck a gurl? my guns gonna be whats "bangin"...../
You can't write.......Break ya pencil rip your page shut your book...../
you tryin' yo bite?....Rip out ya eyeballs drop my verse then tell you too look.../
Ya rhymes is gay.....take the win beat ya ass throw you back in the closet.../
you gonna pay......Kill you slowly snatch ya wallet and take ya bank deposit...../



and its ova

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KiLlAh BwOy

tight battle homey
now lets get uppin sum votes

i cant vote cuz im crewm but im gonan say franchize won he had better punches straight up good batle for both of yall

franchize u did good but u need to improve on ur Multis but u had good one

Killah u did nice but u need more punches and multis but to tell you had way better punches then franchize no offense a close battle but u took it boy

Franchize

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
metas 7/10

26/40

Killah Bwoy

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 8/10
Structure 7/10
Metas 8/10

31/40


Good work guyz

yo i seen better from both of ya'll wasn't really feelin either verses that much
franchise u had punches but none of the was cool at all
and killah, im givin this to u even though i dont like street talk in battles at least u didn't try givin yourself props by callin yourself captain kerk.

killah u actual brought up a couple of cool topics wich is jus... um cooler
Don't watch TV.........Rhymes'll pop through ya Television like-the-ring......../
Lines can't harm me....My Verse affects this kid like the Luthar king speech.../
no extra props on the style this time, cuz it wasn't as good as the last one u did like this. still decent
vote- killah,

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oh and for alll yall who didnt understand the gay and closet line............if ur gay they usually tell u to STAY IN THE CLOSET..cuz gay guys stay in the closet cuz they emberaased

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KiLlAh BwOy

Franchize work on vocab multis and creativity i didnt really like any of ur vesr it was mad played

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
metas 7/10

26/40

Killah Bwoy nice punches u came more creative i likes the closet line ur punches hit harder than franchizes u could work on vocab and multis

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 8/10
Structure 7/10
Metas 8/10

31/40

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Damn yo franchize elevate all i gotta sayt oy ou

Killa bwoy whooodie whooo nice verse playa punches in every line make battles bomb ass pussy

vote killa bwoy return da favore

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Killah-i thought the punches and structure was hott....noo doubt...better vocab..i liked how u used history to try 2 murder the kat..with the whole MLK speech thing...niice...u couldnt have done worse...thats real good

Fran-i guess ur new? dont know..but ur punches was a lil kiddy...up ur vocab, make ur punches a lil more funny as to soo serious...ppl can use a good laugh...multies didnt see any...besides that ur not bad...

vote-Killah,better punches...if it comes to a tie i always look at punches...i think punches kill it....

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QUICKPUNCH VS D~ILLAR~1

str8 vote.....but yall 2 didnt poll vote................

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KiLlAh BwOy