TENKEN.......
YOUR VERSE WAS FUNNIER..
AND LYRICAL STRONGER....
yo ima "split" ur eyes so you can "four-see" my victory~//
call you "Miss Cleo" coz u "predict" ur own loss, fuck the irony~//

this "nigga" actin like M.jackson, "askin for anyone unda 16"~//
whoops! called u a "nigga" my bad "wigga", sorry bout that "Doug Christie"~//

This kids like a "bean" without the "stalk"~//
ur mom was on my "Jack & Golden eggs" befor you could walk~//

WTF is a SPul anyway, it's not in da Dictionary~//
i got u more "dumbfounded" than the bitch "Drew Carey"~//

speakin of which, ur dictionary is as "thick" as Ally McBeal~//
u got more chance of beating me than "M.J's" "court appeal"~//

Whoa! now that i got this audiences attention~//
i'd like to announce "Miss Cleos" intervention~//

the "excitements" over, its time for the "young Crackafella"~//
to spit lyrics that dont got more "chemistry" than Vinegar and Baking Soda~//
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uppin 4 votes

good verse spul u knocked him out with
good flows, rhymes and good structure

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spul aight, make ya lines shorter an use metaphors n shit like that. Enhanses the rhyme...

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To the NYPD: You cant catch watchu cant see!! BITCHES!! HA HA outran u befo, n will do it again!!

parts a ma street free...maaaad threats n murda talk...

"watchu think goes bump in the night,
im either fuckin ya bitch or takin ya life..."

"i hate suckas that always be lyin,
get out tha game fo i stab u witta soderin iron"

take any a my lines ima fuck u up!!!!

i liked tenken shit better because his shit was more creative and he took a risk going all out and his punches made me laugh good battle though keep elevating

hmmmmmm lmfao this is a tough one really dawg...i look and i think..

but heres my break down:

tenken you had sick punches i like that michael jackson line that shit was jokez i was feelin' it but the doug christie line kilt it dawg...i wasnt really feelin' dat shit word.....best line :
speakin of which, ur dictionary is as "thick" as Ally McBeal~//
u got more chance of beating me than "M.J's" "court appeal"~//

that was sick lmfao i give htis 31/50

SPUL: ya shit was koo...it was consistant and you had a good flow your opener was alright but it could of been hotter then after that shit heated up...you came harder then TENKEN and i could see you put more emotion into ur shit then he did

best line :
Man, I should have passed. Your rhymes are all wack
You be deliverin’ more shit, than a lil’ kid on e-lax

i gave this a 33/50 this was a fuckin' close battle mayn dayum

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Ok.....
Breakdown........
Opener -...tenken was both fillers...no real punch...same wit SPuL so neither...
Punches - SPuL...he had more hard hitting punches....Tenken alot of ur ish as fillers..
Flow - tie...both had hot flow..
Wordplay - Tenken....jus had better wordplay...
Personals - Tenken....SPuL stated himself that he didnt have any personals...
Multi's - SPuL...he jus had some but tenken didnt have any...
Closer - SPuL...he had a punch and Tenken's was wack...

Vote - SPuL because of more hard hitting punches....punches win battles....there ya go simple as that.....

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