Deleon on this shit. Better everything. Other dude was just no good. His lines were too long. Nopunches Deleons got this.

Vote on mine
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121115

Deleon U didnt vote on mine whats the deal?

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HAHAHAHAH.....LEON RIPPED EM, SINCE THE OPENER I KNEW DUDE LOST
I lead tha pack even if their aint no one to follow--
I spit more shit than a belimic bitch afraid to swallow--
HAHAHA
FLOW WAS NICE ER THING SO.........
VOTEELEON

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whoa...what's up wit find mind? anyway...deleon most definetely had this one, no question, swamp, u didn't come hard at all bro, u should try to play to the crowd. like "look at this mofo blah blah blah", instead of "now deleon on my bad side you listed/
i got killah rhymes to let you know im sick and twisted/", practice punches, otherwise tho, ur shit DID flow and the structure was fine.

my faves-"I lead tha pack even if their aint no one to follow--
I spit more shit than a belimic bitch afraid to swallow--" <---hot
and
"fuck your dumb shit, i dont like how these soft rooks is actin--
talkin back to they daddy, if they moms wasnt at the party they'd just be jizz stains on a napkin--" hotter, lol

vote-deleon

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lost-2 deadlyvisionz king solo
won-3 quickpunch,gotaasswhoopin4u, orijinal, madhatter81

thanx for droppin those votes

lets get some more up here

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uppin this shit for somw votes lets get this...............

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Heres Deleons break down.............
I lead tha pack even if their aint no one to follow--
I spit more shit than a belimic bitch afraid to swallow--
(Pretty good opener i give it a 7/10)
rookies step up to tha plate but they seem 2 forget they bats--
think they can battle DeLeon? these niggas forget they facts--
(Ok rhyme scheme nothing to amazing i give it a 5/10)
i clap more than than the oscars after an emmy winnin performance--
and pack more heat than a volcano but my flows never go dormant--
(This line i liked jus cuz it was some good use of words u get a 6/10)
fuck your dumb shit, i dont like how these soft rooks is actin--
(very very bad man nothin rhymes with this actin and napkin dont rhyme....1/10)
talkin back to they daddy, if they moms wasnt at the party they'd just be jizz stains
on a napkin--
(same shyt here ur losin points step up and dont jump off ur rhyme scheme iight 1/10)
chew up phony lines and spit em back out like a champ--
specially when i can turn off these phony mc's light like a lamp--
(this was 1 of my favorites could use of words pretty hot shyt 8/10)
your simple, simplistic rhymes aint shit--
(damn man no no no stop with the random lines decent words so it gets a 3/10)
so drop tha keyboard you better off ridin dick--
(another random 1 and a bad 1 at that sop guess what it gets exactly that a 1/10)
so lemme give ya advice and in ya mind's where it sticks--
you a featherweight nigga tryin to deal with tha bricks--
(not bad at all u should use more of this stuff instead of random lines 6/10)
you just dont know, my gats got more *pop* than justin timberlake--
askin how much glory i want? well how much should a winner take?--
(DAMN!!!! hott finisher u started and ended this shyt strong good shyt dawg 8/10)
46/100 thoose random lines hurt you pretty bad.........

Ok now swampsoldier707s break down......
ill snatch you like a batch of cookies/
im a lyrical vet you just another one of them rookies/
(not a bad start i give it a 6/10)
my rhymes they come clean and fresh/
im a motha fuckin beast ill chew you up and spit yo flesh/
(keepin up with the rhymes good idea this is another 6/10)
you know the fact of dis matter is/
my substance is highly hazardous/
i can bust any time cuz im hideous off the canibus/
(3 line hit nice usually pretty hard but u pulled it off well so ima give it a 8-10)
this shit aint over well not yet till the day that im stoppin im droppin/
bombs on dis foo named deleon and im lockin my fist real tight left and right and fuck them raps you be rockin/
(a little dragged but still pretty good 5/10)
now deleon on my bad side you listed/
i got killah rhymes to let you know im sick and twisted/
(You on your game kid keep it comin 7-10)
im flossin and bossin and i will always be respected/
deleon you an mc who will always be rejected/
(this is a good spit no random lines and a good mix of rhymes 6-10)
so if you wanna see me come to v-town south/
dont even write back dawg just shut yo mouth/
(good finisher not to strong but pretty good 5/10)
43/70

Puncheseleon
Flow:Swampsoldier
Opener/Finishereleon
Personals:Swampsoldier
Vocab:Swampsoldier

Good Battle.....Vote:Swampsoldier

alright thanx to all that voted so far

lets get some more in here

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Vote DeLeon

That guy kicked the script outta here descent opener good multies, punchlines and all were there. In my opinion, not close at all had me laughin nearly off my seat...and thats hard to do. Well spit DeLeon!

V/DeLeon

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R.I.P OMB

To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

Wow i dont evan think that was close all of Swamps flow was so basic and Del. came way harder.

Del. 8/10
Swamp 4-5/10

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