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04-29-04, 12:07 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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About a girl (feedback plz)
IP: 5043 32F4
2nd open mic......
A second ago we was in a tight spot cuz u overheard me tellin a girl she was hot girl don't let that ruin our relationship cuz she ain't got you ass, your eyes or your hips so think right before you go crazy because a second ago u was as pretty as a daisy so listen to the facts cuz our love we can never act I thought u was down for me, down for us now all you wanna do is cuss and cuss i can't believe your attitude we was sexxin & u ruined the mood i sorry i don't wanna be cruel but since u ruined the mood i ran out of fuel cuz right now i'm sherm and u sucked up all the sperm i know, i know i'm gettin too personal but look at all the times u pushed & pulled all over and on the dick it was like u was driving a car and i was the stick back and forth up and down hurry up, hurry up saw a frown girl thought u wanted to get low thought u wanted to be treated like a hoe.......... ya thoughts on it????? |
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04-29-04, 01:10 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: AD41 912D
That Shit Was Hot I Lik Ehow You Playboy'd It Up....holla Front .....1
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hey yo im known to play it low// dont confuse me with these cornballs on the radio// ima true hustlah you couldnt fit in my shoes// my pager buzz to much man my hips are bruised// faMBa$e Bitch ass niggas Bean Town thats how im doing it....enjoy life make money.....death b4 dishonor trust no body that aint your fam and fuck that you cant even trust them some times i cant even trust myself lil niggas.....1 |
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04-29-04, 06:21 PM
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#3
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Umm...Yeah
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IP: 5043 32F4
yo thanks fo tha feedback
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04-29-04, 06:27 PM
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#4
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IP: C9D5 73B4
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So Unique now i see ya up shits creek tried to start some beef and ran scared upon me showin my teeth ,mind playin tricks of casket thoughts with your family creepin over screamin no no god, dont take em away, one tounge lash. distaster strikes where it may. over cash or ass alas wake up you dont wanna play .......yo i need help i have no idea how to battle in here! |
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04-29-04, 06:32 PM
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#5
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Flyweight
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IP: C1DA C961
yo ^^^^ u battle in the front lines homie...
yo the verse was tite i thought it was gonna be a pussy bitch song but i was wrong. the rhymes were a bit basic, the flow was aight, and up the vocab. yo holla back at mine THE SICKEST OF SICK
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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04-30-04, 11:46 AM
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#6
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Umm...Yeah
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IP: 5043 32F4
ya i needa lot of practice since i'm juss beginning
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04-30-04, 07:21 PM
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New to RB
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IP: BD3E 228F
If u havin gurl trouble i feel bad for u son/I got 99 problems but a bitch aint one
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04-30-04, 09:43 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 7165 B811
That was hott for a beginner man.. keep that shit up.. u just needa throw in some more wordplays
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05-01-04, 11:19 AM
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Umm...Yeah
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IP: 5043 32F4
naw i got a girl, i was juss writing a song bout my ex
but there's nuthin between us anymore cuz we cool wit each other we still friends i guess we started as friends & we gonna end as friends....
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05-01-04, 11:38 AM
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-Certified Dope-
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IP: DB49 F2F2
not bad at all man.. pretty hot
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05-01-04, 11:47 AM
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Umm...Yeah
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IP: 5043 32F4
yo thanks fo all the feedback appreciate it a lot
juss needa know how im doin
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05-01-04, 01:21 PM
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#12
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IP: C9D5 73B4
good flow man for real .......keep hagglin this shit yo check out my shit.. dickridaz..on open mic aight peace
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05-01-04, 03:38 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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IP: 5043 32F4
so out of 10 wat do ya'll think
??/10
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05-01-04, 04:52 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: C1DA C961
Yea, I think this was pretty hot. You had good flow in it throughout. Increase the vocab in it, and it would be a 9 or a 9.5 outta 10. I give it 8.5. good drop. keep droppin'.
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06-10-04, 07:18 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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IP: 5043 32F4
aight thanks for all the feedback really appreciate it anymore for this
thing made like 2 weeks ago a day or 2 b4 I started really battling rating: ??/10
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