aight i set it up so you spit,,....
dont be a chump....

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"NOW ITS ON>>>NOW ITS ON>>>I dont know why nigga you livin a lie and plus i despise those who try.... "
- tech n9ne

no pre writtin shit
no crew votes
and i aint funna do dat murder you shit cuz i aint kno u so imma flow
aight den

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"NOW ITS ON>>>NOW ITS ON>>>I dont know why nigga you livin a lie and plus i despise those who try.... "
- tech n9ne

yo ok when we post by and u go first ight..............

I be in dis as i speak freak da beat sac king is so unique
i blow more green den tiger woods got unda his cleet
you should undastand how my composition sound so amazin'
competitions on rb settin a demo like they was fundraisin'
i snatch mics smack mics stands wit backhands
i hit you wit a hook so you can really undastand
grace dis page i cant let me go to rage
and all i got is my thoughts whitey313 and shit i aint lettin dis go to waste
I'll lace dis page wit motion bitch open yo eyes so u can find my devotion
your a ROOKIE who aint got shit to say
thats why youzza fagit who aint even get no 4-play
i murder you with my lyrical and verbals killings
commin out like a pistol instead of lead shillings
i aint even flyweight but i drop like im heavy
i have yo ass mimicin and have yo mind empty

i aint even gotta do no more dis will beat him...haha

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"NOW ITS ON>>>NOW ITS ON>>>I dont know why nigga you livin a lie and plus i despise those who try.... "
- tech n9ne

ok here im spittin

Attackin~herbs smackin you wit my sick~sick~verbs/
Screwing~pervs doing tounge2tounge action makin~it~curve/
Pushin~and~pullin PrimoX plugs, tossin~slugs at this bitch~ass~thug/
Crackin~shoulders makin them 'shrug' while im steppin on Eternal like a 'fuckin~bug'/
All you do is ask 'why' because i killed you in a 'lullaby' and when u found out, all u did is 'cry'/

Dawg i got you 'HOOKED' by my rap skill like i put a fuckin curse on you/
Got you 'BOOKED' like an old library book, and that is true/
Once you read this shit, you gon get 'SHOOKED' like a bumpy ass car ride/
Im the center of attention, made you 'LOOKED' like i got a blue cap with an orange bill stride/
Nigga you just got 'TOOKED' of the best ride in yo lifetime, to crush yo pride/

Open casket, dead bodies flowin, bloody arms and legs, and PrimoX shit is showin/
I'll make you pop viagra pills like its all good to make your dick keep growin/
Thats if u really have 1, cuz all yo girls dumped you for havin a small *One Who Doesn't Leave the House a Lot*/
I got all yo bitches bustin my balls wit they tounges and still i fucked and shanked her/
Makin you all pissed cuz i gave yo girlfriend a taste, twist and twirl/

ight first 1 to 3 votes win ight.....................

aight check it:

Sac king: i think you cam a lil harder han whitey did ya feel...coz ur punches hit harder than his...and i was feelin ya verse..
but you need personals...

whitey...
you need to elevate dogg...i see potential but you need to step it up a notch aight...and ge that dumb shit outta ya sig

v/sac king

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Aight Aight Nice Battle

Sac King U Had Nice Punches Homie Nice//

Whitey U Had Good Flowz// Work On Yo Punches Homie// U Had Punches In Der But U Need To Hit Harder//

Vote-sac King

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

dawg i look at your shit cause i'ma whitey but i can't stand ~ shit or the breaks you put in dat shit. and get off shady's dick white baster and fuck this battle sac king won. i liked the flow and the punch. whitey it was that battle but guit that ~ and breaking shit.

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Sac King-Had some stretched lines in there.I wasn't feeling punches.All-in-All,ur verse was somewhat boring.
Best Line-i murder you with my lyrical and verbals killings
commin out like a pistol instead of lead shillings
Worst line-too much to choose

Whitey-I liked ur verse way better.Nice wordplay,flow,and punches.
Best line-Got you 'BOOKED' like an old library book, and that is true/
Once you read this shit, you gon get 'SHOOKED' like a bumpy ass car ride/
Worst Line-I got all yo bitches bustin my balls wit they tounges and still i fucked and shanked her/
Makin you all pissed cuz i gave yo girlfriend a taste, twist and twirl/


Overall-Both of you were complex and creative.But Whitey's verse seemed better.Sac,next time try to add wordplay and imagery.

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This was a pretty decent battle props to both of you. Sac King you overall came a bit harder perhaps you've had more battles under your belt or what. Both had decent punches but whitey yours were a bit underdeveloped. A bit better flow as well, whitey work on yoru flow it enhances your punches, keep elivating