I'm busy too i'm bout 2 check off for a few I gotta make this run ya dig
But i'll be back to spit. 1

(Aight i'm back now and ready.)

I'm in a Boston state of mind I got my Yankee haters hat on,
Call da doc and get a sling for your raps they like a bad arm,
I extend my hand to rookies homie so grab on...

Listen homeboy I came to change your state of mind and place it on the state of mine like what's tha RAM thinkin,
Do he spit hot loogies on this rap forum,
Is NYSOM really prepared for him,
R.A.M stands for Rip And Mutilate,
Anybody in a state of mind different from what i think,
And this cock sucker really love where he sleep,
But in Boston niggaz like you is minced meat I'll place a bet on it,
NY state of mind wouldn't survive if I gave him 10 guns and shot everyone in my set for him,
Like Winston smokes that's no bull or maybe New York'll pay his debt for him,
Why you call me out nothin better to do,
Must of seen tha posts and thought I was rookie but veteran dude,
I'm better than you,
Your rhymes crashed in da begining now they just veget-ables...
(closer)
I hated to do it but had to do it you issued tha challenge,
But your rhymins off target like a chemical embalance,
You shoulda polished your tarnished raps in da first place,
I'll win 5 to 1 that scenario's tha worst case,
Lame brain keep tha state of mind of your birthplace.

(Don't get it twisted folks I ain't got nothin against NYC it's just rap)

ny...

ok opener that was retarted.. rare as a guy named shelf... are you joking... ok anyways you gotta work on flow throw in multis make your shit flow and stop witht he corny ass punches and kinda do some research on who your battle look on profile see what there name is... do anything you can to get some mad personalas in there cuz thats what kills people... i mean i would quote a line but i couldnt find one good enough to quote the best line up there is the one in ur sig... anyways elevate...

ram...

ok you one this verse inyour opener and it wasnt even that good..

NY state of mind wouldn't survive if I gave him 10 guns and shot everyone in my set for him,
Like Winston smokes that's no bull or maybe New York'll pay his debt for him,
.
^^ aight i like that line kinda made me laugh just try not to rhyme him with him but it end up workin for you... your whole verse where punches aimed at him so you clearly one this in every aspect plus you got mad flow...

vote ram

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I think RAM got this. Everything was better. He had the flow, plus it was an intelligent rhyme. I aint seen too much like that on this site. NY u really werent that bad if u just work on it u get better. Flow was garbage and your punches werent really anything, u just kept talkin about how much ya are on shady's dick. That aint no NY shit come on now kid. Any way i really enjoyed RAM's shit it was pretty good. Theres a few things u could work on but keep it up. I vote RAM

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Ny state of mind: your opening line was quite simple. It also looks like you're struggling to find words that rhyme, so your lines end up not making sence (even if they rhyme or not)

You had some good punches RAM,
"NY state of mind wouldn't survive if I gave him 10 guns and shot everyone in my set for him," - RAM

Vote: RAM

good lookin folks keep votin.
And i'm open to constructive criticism so if theres sumthin on my part you ain't feelin let it be known

Decent drops from both sides.

NY State of Mind:
You're flow wasn't bad, and you had a few clever lines, but you suffered in the punches category. For the most part, they weren't directed at R.A.M., and they could have been more clever.

Best Line:
"I'll Erase Your Computer's R.A.M. With These Lyrickz"
(Since it was actually directed at R.A.M.)

Worse Line:
"Who Are You?, You're Az Rare Az Da Name Shelp"
(Rather on the cheesy side)

R.A.M.:
An all around strong drop with good flow and clever, focused punches. My only little quibble with it, and this is nitpicking, is that at 22 lines to NYSoM's 10, your verse sounded like it had some filler that could've been cut out.

Best Line:
"Listen homeboy I came to change your state of mind and place it on the state of mine"

Worse line:
"Your rhymes crashed in da begining now they just veget-ables"
(I'm not sure I get it. :P )

Verdict: R.A.M.

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"With all this extra stressin
The question I wonder is after death, after my last breath
When will I finally get to rest" - Tupac Amaru Shakur, "Me Against The World"

what you mean i dropped another verse theres only 1 up there

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