the breakdown

Ha ha who da fucks dis man t-storm??? he dissed the DK Knights?!? Wot the fuck man ima let him feel this check and drop...

(Verse)
...Lyrical style 1st class like a drug and ima pump mega slugs into this fake thug/
Who thinks he can come into the RB club and diss the Dk Knight Thugs/
Are u on a death wish coz if u are then i can carry it out on command...Like a Genie/
Coz im thinkin u aint feelin us or me...here's my glock HA and rest for eternity/
And this aint self gloryfied...these are truthful words/
Quit while ur ahead T coz u know gettin beaten like a bitch hurts/
And whats wit the name t-storm???...u think u wild or sumthin/
Our country (England) hardly gets hardcore storms...actually im wonderin/
Does the T stand for tiny, tryin or trippin?/
Coz u gettin tiny fo tryin...and my PIMP hand make sure u gonn be slippin/
Cover yoself up in quarentee...coz yo wack rap disease is a worry fo me/
Tiny storm is jus a lil rain shower...he'll pass over in 8 lines u'll see/
Im the biggest disaster that u'll probably ever see word is bond/
Oh except when u walked in on yo bitch and her ex Raymond/
Coz the truth is...EVERYBODY LOVES RAYMOND and yo bitch is willin 2 prove it/
But dont worry u wont be a virgin forever...1 day she'll give up the clit/
But ur gay...so u wont...ur gynophobic/ (gynophobic = fear of women real word)
I'd take u to a strip club...but u'd prolly run from it/
Pack yo bags and fly away the next day/
Collect call Raymond and tell him to flee the same way/ (Secret lovers)

Aight thats me done waitin on u...


nice drop man...little stretced bust some funny lines you know...raymond was good...not enough personals but still a good drop...


okay now for tstorm

they call u mad dog..n ur crew they call dark knights/
i call u sad dog.. n ur crew do shit but bite/
fukin wit me...set u all on fire...im crazy-psycho-manic/
ur crew alarm bell ringin...t cumin up swingin...cause u all to panic/
ur shits so weak..u been in for colonic irrogation?/
dnt try to understand...u wudnt know the meaning of personification/
bitch ull never surpass me...coz im insubordinate/
u cudnt work that out...if i gave u a map n tha co-ordinate/
bitch u claim ur serious...i think your all delerious/
ma styles complex,convex n concave...ur styles straight played/
you rap like u ashmatic...my style pumps like im pneumatic/
you must b sufferin from amnesia?...coz i tie u up in mastic(tape)
u need to grow a brain...ur styles fucked n lame/
ma gran cud do beta...n ur shit cud do wit her zimma-frame/
so fuck u...first i merked jay-dogg...n now ima merk you/
whos next in line...i take out ya whole bitch-ass crew.


BORING...that styles played man...i wasn't feelin this at all...no personals really here either...at least nogood ones...that's the truth...no real funny disses...choppy flow too...you know it...go back and look...eventhough it wasn't stretched it still a sloppy flow...
played punches...and old style


vocab...mad cause storm was forcing big vocab and thats worse...
punch...mad cause he was funny
personal...storm eventhough it wasn't a very good one
flow...tie...cause they both stunk
extras...mad he made me laugh...

people need to learn a witty style...not a thesaurus style...that's just my take...later

v-mad

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ima go wit t storm as well i just liked his flow better, good job though mad dog.
MY VOTE=T-STORM

honestly, i wasnt really feelin' this battle, but here it goes.

mad dog- no bro im not hating..........i just didnt dig it cutty. good attempt though, your improving.

t storm- you had some okay personals and decent vocab, but your verse lacked as well.

vote.............................................. ..t storm

you guys are both new to the site, so dont take criticism (good/bad) personal. good luck to both of you. keep on elevating. one.


s.v..........c.s.

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Very Close Punches Where Eve...But Mad Dog had Better Flow

And Thiz personal Won It For Me

Does the T stand for tiny, tryin or trippin?/

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*NET RECORD*

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structure= ok i think they both had good structure both need little work though, but i think storm just took it
vocab=i think storm definetly had better vocab all round he used much more complex words n rhymed them off good as well
multiples= i think madd had better multiples, even though they didnt hit very hard he still had better multiples.

overall i think storm took this one, but their wasnt much between them n they both elevated which was good but i give it to t-storm.
MY VOTE=T-STORM

Aight man keep the votes coming in uppin..........

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To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

ok first of all mad dog t-storm good battle, it was close because both did great jobs uhm the flow and the strcutre was both their for both rhymes which was good cause i hate reading shit that dont flow, could use some more multi's from both sides, but both of you two delivered with the punches but what took thi battle for t-storm were just that his hit a bit harder ....good battle guys

vote-t-storm
return the fav....vot on shifty -vs- pimp rawb its 4-2 for me maybe one of youre guys votes will make the dif

aight good battle boyz, was pretty tight...

Mad Dog,

This was some funny shit, liked the personals, alrite flow and structure (a few stretched lines), good punches, good verse. i liked this bit,

Oh except when u walked in on yo bitch and her ex Raymond/
Coz the truth is...EVERYBODY LOVES RAYMOND and yo bitch is willin 2 prove it/
But dont worry u wont be a virgin forever...1 day she'll give up the clit/
But ur gay...so u wont...ur gynophobic/ (gynophobic = fear of women real word)

Mad Dog 7/10

T-Storm,

Good verse, was more complex, good flow n structure, good punches and personals, i liked this bit,

ur shits so weak..u been in for colonic irrogation?/
dnt try to understand...u wudnt know the meaning of personification/
bitch ull never surpass me...coz im insubordinate/
u cudnt work that out...if i gave u a map n tha co-ordinate/
bitch u claim ur serious...i think your all delerious/
ma styles complex,convex n concave...ur styles straight played/

T-Storm 7/10

tight battle but ima have to giv it to T-Storm, better overall structure and i liked the more complex verse... Good verse though Mad Dog... stay up

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Aight thanx all who voted so far keep it up uppin i want this battle closed soon (in my favour hopefully) its been good so far much props to t-storm too tight battle but lets get the votes comin in!!!!

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To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

i dont no for some reason i'm fillin mad dog a lil more
then prolly cause he had better disses.I think it was
equal in punches and mad dogg had a lil bit more flow
so my vote goes to mad dog.

My vote: mad dog

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124043