10-15 Lines
No D/r
No Crew Votes
Spit Due 20 Min After Mine
No Feedin

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Intelligence sparks ya body’s outlined in chalk
All because this ignorant mothafucka wanted to talk
You destin’ to lose I’m capable of rapin’ this dude
You’s a joke Da Rican was born on April Fools
Moms must be proud yeah u finally got ya degree
Graduated “Top Of The Class” at “Dumb Ass University”
Satisfaction I feel when I’m part of the action
You wouldn’t be half of me if you was cut up in fractions
Bastard ya lyrics are dead they put to rest in a casket
Pass it along Rican needs help cuz you getting ya ass kicked
Let’s go in reverse you nursed and u thought and you cursed
Conversed and disbursed lyrics as you pre-writ ya verse
I got a urge in me to give you some lyrical surgery
You couldn’t “Emerge” on me if you had a medical “Emerg~ency

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You I'm going to smoke yo screen like being high off weed/
Ripped yo ass up like hungry after smoking weed after munchies/
Aint that funny/
Yes Its comical until my words starts hurting/
I spit shit precise…while you just blurting/
you aint native to this game but you really foreign/
grab the next flight and start boarding/
cut you up like a Japanese remake versions/
I can win elections against this dude even if I rocked Iraqi turbans//
Drop those spits as fast as silicone tits get grabbed like sexual entertainment/
you hate me cause i can actually ryme instead of talking bullshit/
ya wouldnt have a hit record even if God was behind it//

uppin^^^^^^^^^^^!!!!!!!!!!!
Good spit hommie i'm out fo tha night

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smokescreen simply had a few better punches and his flow was alsomore on point, plus he had better punches.

vote - smokescreen

smoke had better punches then his opponent

VOTE SMOKE

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Fuck all that put me down FUCK U ALL

*breakdown*

smokescreen

flow 7/10
punches 7/10
structure 8/10
rhymes 8/10
total 30/40

ProRican

flow 5/10
punches 5/10
structure 6/10
rhymes 6/10
total 22/40

ma vote goes to Smokescreen good battle tho

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Both these verses was ill to death

Wordplay-Smoke
Punches-Pro-Rican
Flow-Pro Rican
Structure- Smoke
Rhymes-Pro Rican

This battle was hard as fuck to decide my V/ Rican he edge this shit out barely
Smokescreen ya lines was hard as hell.

i would give this vote a tie but u give a vote

yeah yo im feelin both of em, I wouldnt want to say nething bad about either, but ima hafta vote so heres what I got....

Smoke= had a better, Opener and a better closer, and ultimately thats what has decided it for me...

Rican- your shit was good too, had some nice punches and a good format nothin bad to say...close battle....

Vote= smoke

*I got an audio battle that needs some REEEEAAALLL voters its -O- Vs SenseR the link wouldnt work so I cant post it...

good battle..

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