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Old 05-21-04, 12:51 PM   #1
NastyEm
"All I do iz Simply Punchlinez"
 
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Nasty Em Vs. Neva Dat

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10 linez
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dik hate votez or crew

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Old 05-21-04, 12:54 PM   #2
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Old 05-21-04, 01:00 PM   #3
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Listen...You talk Alot Keep Addin Exagerations/
This faggot hate...so he chit chattin' blabbin' debatin'/

Youza Snitch nigga..But keep addin you information/
Imma Infiltrate and set you to fire like imflammation/

Hey chap you hatin'..get holes like excavagation/
and each slug come wit force like a word in exclamation/

imma expectation..you more like and infestation/
i dont need no explation to exterminate ya/

its cake Im creatin' statements thats fascinatin/
and let the words rip you like process of laceration/
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Old 05-22-04, 01:48 AM   #4
NastyEm
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damn wat should i key?
i spit "Exclusive" "rapz" its like my nick name should be known as~ "Bar" :Code"~// ( think about it)
And u couldnt "(Ex)-Terminate" Me if u even had a ~Divorce wit Arnold~//( think)
Ima Dangerouz Cat, stay armed, 45' az a ~Palm Tool~//
if ima "snitch,"i'll bet "50 cents" dat you rock Tee's dat spell out "~Ja Rule(s)~"// ( think whores)
Why dis fagat posted first? iz He in a ~hurry to get murked~?//
cuz "SlugZ" will Attract to you, like you was Forever ~"Buried in da dirt~"// ( think)
should be lucky, u on da same thread as da godd,Em ~spittin barz~//
little "fagat", thinkz he'z good cuz he wrote about his "Lifestyle" to ~"stick it Hard"~// (look at his sig)
u cant be dat wack, son, so shoot me wit a ~betta rap~//
u beating Nasty Em, iz as common as ur name bitch ~"Neva Dat"~// ( its a wrap bitch!)
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Old 05-22-04, 02:23 AM   #5
macKa
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Nasty came better with his shit. his punches were hard and his wordplay had me laughing. good shit. Nevadat, not bad, just keep elevating and geta bit more complex.
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Old 05-22-04, 02:24 AM   #6
NightRida
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nastyem got that one on ya that shit is hot as hell nasty em
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Old 05-22-04, 02:24 AM   #7
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Flow - Tie, Neva's Shit Flowed Good But It Was Sooo Simple. Em Was On Point Wit His And At The Same Time Including More In His Lines So He Gets The Nod.

Punches - Nasty, He Won This Category Hands Down. Neva Wasn't Even Tryin To Throw Any. Em Was Not Only throwin, But Hittin:

And u couldnt "(Ex)-Terminate" Me if u even had a ~Divorce wit Arnold~//

cuz "SlugZ" will Attract to you, like you was Forever ~"Buried in da dirt~"//

Personals: Nasty, Once Again Neva Was Kinda Non-Existent As Far As Personals Went. Nasty Was Hittin Tho:

should be lucky, u on da same thread as da godd,Em ~spittin barz~//
little "fagat", thinkz he'z good cuz he wrote about his "Lifestyle" to ~"stick it Hard"~//

Wordplay: Nasty, Neva Didn't Attempt Any.. Nasty Did.

Creativity: Nasty, Neva's Verse Didn't Really Have Any Originality Or Creativity. His Lines Were Somewhat boring, But Most Of Em's Were Mad Original.

Structure: Neva. His Verse Was Structured A Little Better, And He Had Even Lines.

Overall: NASTY EM Gets The Vote. He Out Did Neva In Most Categories, And Just Havin A Structured Verse Aint Gon Get You "W's". It's The Content That's Most Important, And Nasty Dominated.
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Old 05-22-04, 02:34 AM   #8
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Listen...You talk Alot Keep Addin Exagerations/
This faggot hate...so he chit chattin' blabbin' debatin'/
Egh, kinda weak opener... coulda used some wordplay or a good punchline
Youza Snitch nigga..But keep addin you information/
Imma Infiltrate and set you to fire like imflammation/
weak, very basic rhyming going on here no punches or wordplay.
Hey chap you hatin'..get holes like excavagation/
and each slug come wit force like a word in exclamation/
Theres some wordplay in this-- this bar isn't too bad rather decent.
imma expectation..you more like and infestation/
i dont need no explation to exterminate ya/
egh, nothing special here
its cake Im creatin' statements thats fascinatin/
and let the words rip you like process of laceration/
egh basic... the punchline is basic and all it is is a couple of lines that rhyme.


damn wat should i key?
i spit "Exclusive" "rapz" its like my nick name should be known as~ "Bar" :Code"~// ( think about it)
And u couldnt "(Ex)-Terminate" Me if u even had a ~Divorce wit Arnold~//( think)
Decent couple of lines... You incorporated some wordplay, and combined it to form a creative punchline
Ima Dangerouz Cat, stay armed, 45' az a ~Palm Tool~//
if ima "snitch,"i'll bet "50 cents" dat you rock Tee's dat spell out "~Ja Rule(s)~"// ( think whores)
Decent, I know where you were tryin to go here- kinda played but decent.
Why dis fagat posted first? iz He in a ~hurry to get murked~?//
cuz "SlugZ" will Attract to you, like you was Forever ~"Buried in da dirt~"//
good wordplay...i feel it ( think)
should be lucky, u on da same thread as da godd,Em ~spittin barz~//
little "fagat", thinkz he'z good cuz he wrote about his "Lifestyle" to ~"stick it Hard"~// (look at his sig)- Good personal... This is what wins battles but its like noone hears me.
u cant be dat wack, son, so shoot me wit a ~betta rap~//
u beating Nasty Em, iz as common as ur name bitch ~"Neva Dat"~// ( its a wrap bitch!)- Good closer... I think ur verses are good man..good wordplay decent punches you win this battle no problem..Goodjob...1
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Old 05-22-04, 12:20 PM   #9
NastyEm
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how cum there aint no poll???? shit watz goin on? im confused...
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Old 05-22-04, 12:59 PM   #10
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And u couldnt "(Ex)-Terminate" Me if u even had a ~Divorce wit Arnold~//

haha

nasty em murdered neva with wordplay, metas, multis, flow everything, there was no contest
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Old 05-22-04, 02:27 PM   #11
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aint dat 5 to 0??? how cum there aint no poll
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Old 05-26-04, 12:00 PM   #12
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yooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! how come i fuckin cant get a win for dis match???????


no fuckin poll lol???? how u report dis shit
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