you know the rules 10lines lets go u spit first

f ure that damn great why do u mastebate intead of getting a bitch i leave this fool with a stich/
u try to find a job but u cant so u then attempt to rob a bank u iz a wank ill break u down with a left hook this guy aint a half way crook hes scared to look scared to death im guessing its his breath this cat thinks he can ryme like meth/
i smack u with a metaphor leave my fans screaming for more ure mumma be a hore she kinda slowerlike a naughhghhghg

just alitte somtin 2 win cause ur verse sucked so no need 4 too much effort

Gavin take them bubble gum wraps back to the candy shack//
ur rhymes are fiction while mynes state the facts jack//
ur rhymes are faded G, while mynes jus glisten B//
that whacc verse gets 'lit up' like a 'christmas tree' by me//
ill throw u a big 'L' for 'L'ack of flows and ur 'L'osing spits//
Gavin u have no text how much sorrier can u get????//
retire from hip-hop, got to pop and form another n-sync//
cuz for the first time Great 1 leaving u instinct//

uppin 4 votezzx

uppin 4votes

uppin 4 votes

what about our battle nigga
spit now little man aight
ill b waiting

uppin

well both were kinda weak but da best of da weak was da great 1 cuz da otha one was really lame. but if eitha 1 of u want a battle set it up and holla back

uppin 4 votez

da great 1 got this
gavin u got to do somthing a whole lot better than this.
dog great1 actually had punch line and stucture
work on it man get him next time

vote: great one

gavin

Flow 5/10
Rhymes 5/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 5/10

great
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10

vote goes to Great....he had betta punches....

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