usual rulez
10 lines
u spittin first




gud luk dawg...............................

T-storm whats that bout is it cuz your a storm of tears||
Back down cuz you aint gonna win lets face it its my show||
it must be a crime to waste my time ripping a guy like you||
dog hate to break it to ya but your a a fake cuz u tryed to play thee player||
the only thing i wanna ask is why you still bother coming here?||
with a shit rhyme and no punches your career here is over||
this is gonna be an easy ko cuz man your a joke||
And im gonna leave you trumatised and paralised||
but why and i being so hard on you?||
becuase your a chump trying coming back in afew months time||

ok kid....

i dnt know bout u nips..but ma style clearly rips...dog u cnt "rhyme"/
u need wrds 2 match at the end of ya line..here..try imatating "mine"/

first off u need a heavy name, "nips" wnt cut it..try tha alias "fine-mind"/
haha...coz u sound jus like him dawg..another cat that woz "rhyme-blind"/

structure fallin apart wit all that weak "filler".seems u gona remain "unknown"/
need 2 prewrite..cum up wit sumert "iller",thats gud advice... so"go-home"/

i rip u wit a "war of words", ma shits an intoxicatin-verbal-assault/
ima spitfire..cock "my gun n serve"..so sick i lace-ya-wounds-wit-salt/

u rap like a circus clown...u prob a dickrider n wana suck "ma-falace"
..coz fukin wit ma shit..like walkin a tight rope..u aint got tha "balance"


UPIN YHIS SHIT^^^^^^^^^^^^^

T-storm whats that bout is it cuz your a storm of tears||
Back down cuz you aint gonna win lets face it its my show||
0...wtf??? didnt even fuckin rhyme dog!!!
it must be a crime to waste my time ripping a guy like you||
dog hate to break it to ya but your a a fake cuz u tryed to play thee player||
1...no rhymin, but i suppose the crime/time was a rhyme in ure first line!!!
the only thing i wanna ask is why you still bother coming here?||
with a shit rhyme and no punches your career here is over||
0...no rhyme!!!
this is gonna be an easy ko cuz man your a joke||
And im gonna leave you trumatised and paralised||
0...no fuckin rhyme!!
but why and i being so hard on you?||
becuase your a chump trying coming back in afew months time||
0...no rhyme again, that spit was fuckin bullshit!!


i dnt know bout u nips..but ma style clearly rips...dog u cnt "rhyme"/
u need wrds 2 match at the end of ya line..here..try imatating "mine"/
6...nice line rippin his verse there.
first off u need a heavy name, "nips" wnt cut it..try tha alias "fine-mind"/
haha...coz u sound jus like him dawg..another cat that woz "rhyme-blind"/
7...funny shit there!!
structure fallin apart wit all that weak "filler".seems u gona remain "unknown"/
need 2 prewrite..cum up wit sumert "iller",thats gud advice... so"go-home"/
6...nice line but basic wordplay really!!
i rip u wit a "war of words", ma shits an intoxicatin-verbal-assault/
ima spitfire..cock "my gun n serve"..so sick i lace-ya-wounds-wit-salt/
8...nice line, gud multi and some nice wordplay!!
u rap like a circus clown...u prob a dickrider n wana suck "ma-falace"
..coz fukin wit ma shit..like walkin a tight rope..u aint got tha "balance"
6...nice line but again rather basic.


POINTS TOTALS

Nips - 1/50
t-storm - 33/50

V/ - who do u fuckin think???

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yo t storm u mudered this fool, u hit harder, u flowed much better and u made sense, whereas "nips" (ha ha ha) Couldn't rhyme, made no sense n was jus out right weak, "nips" take note & practice.
v/ t storm

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HMMM familiar style cant pin point it oh course i can look at T's verse its obvious who it is nice try im uppin this for my fam member

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To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

Vote-T storm...
Nips i didnt even need to read all of your verse to decide
u wasnt gonna get much out of this battle..
T storm nuthin speactacular but took this guy easily.
vocab flow wordplay multis u came on top

weak, weak, weak

nips
ya flow waz all weak and u hardly had blowz, we both newbiez but u shouldn't act like 1, u had an alright structure but, u need better defense than that...try harder next time

t-storm
ya structure waz bad but u had blowz and that'z what countz, u hurt this kid, dawg. u need better structure cauze i waz gettin confuzed with what u did and all those " " " " ", but u did good

rating
opener, t-storm
structure, nips
blowz, t-storm
clozer, t-storm

da vote goez 2...t-storm

good, nips is probably a female MC cauze it's probably short 4 nipplez

try harder

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wow this shit was some true shit t ripped u he aint even have to come hard he could have just used plain and simple RHYMES and he woulda won u some shit. nips u need to go read some goose and learn to rhyme for ur own good

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us real make withdrawl while yall go through em/
-Joe Buddens

cud anyone explain how ma structure woz bad?...i kept tha same line length..
rhymed in tha right places......^^^^^no hate on your opinion dawg...
but if we being real ma structure woz pretty tite...his woz all ova the place...
sumone tell me if im wrong??