Huse rules
No crew votes
No ridin
No feeding!
10-20 lines
5 bars.
You textin first.

you spittin first

I can and I'm bout ready to drop, you can drop first.

Hey yo what the fuck this guy on a mega acid trip//
or that might have been his momma on acid who fell on a ugly fat dick//
when she gave birth she claim it was a accident//
But thats ok freaks belong too//
even though pops screamed when he first seen and holded you//
no wonder he never wanted you//
So you started to rap but yo cant do that//
I guess go back to what you were good at//
and start sellin yer ass for crack//
this niggas all whack to thinkin battlen me//
this niggas now sufferin a major fatality//
How can it be you had such a bright future//
NOT yer futures crack, a freek, and beein a white wigger.

Ayo Man After Me At The End Your Fucking Slaughtered -
Like How Jesus Was By Judas,/
Cuz You Never 'Come Proper' Like A Malnourished Eunuch,//
Faggot, I'm Makin' Sure This Loss-Is-Fatal,/
Hoe Ass Need To Go Back To Lip Gloss-And-Facials,/
Cuz You're All Bout Being 'Friends' Like "Ross-And-Racheal",//
But I stick To The Clit, Not "Dicks", But Niggih No Thank You/
Your Multi's 'Go No Where Fast' Like 'Gerbils On Tread-Mills',/
When I Bring Da Tec Your Head'll Be Like A 'Mechanical Pencil',/
What Da 'Lead-Fills',//
Your Organs'll-Get-Lifted, Shot Up And Dropped Like Porcel-ain-Dishes,-
I Spit Flows of Essence like Labyrinths-Of-Intellectual-Velocity/
While You Stay A Maggot With Faggots Stagnant-Ineffectual-Mediocrity//
Like "MisMatched Puzzle Pieces" Your Punches Don't "Make-A-Scene",/
Follow Your Real Aspirations Of What I Expect Out Of You, Becoming A Make-Up-Queen,/
Maybe It's May-Be-Lene! Cuz You're A Homo Gettin' Blazed-Like-Green, Follow your Gay-Pride-Dreams, Cuz Rappin's Not For You Dawg Wit That Brain-Like-Beans//
Sus-dick gettin Lined Up For Punches Like Fixed-Boxing-Matches,/
Nevah give props to niggaz, Cuz He's A Lip-Locking-Faggot,//
You "Don't Got Glocs" The Only "Caps That You Bust" Are On Your Multi's,/
Which Use More "Force" Than A "Jedi-Knights"/
You "Can't See Me Dawg" like " Red-eye-sights,/

Aight now that the Real has texted let get some votes, I'm uppin for em........

needs so votes come on ppl

Ayo votes please the fav. is back at yall if yall need it, vote please, uppin for votes.

Suspect187:

Flow: 5/10
Metas: None
Multis: 3/10
Word Play: 4/10

Overall: 4/10


Real Thorough:

Flow: 8/10
Metas: 8/10
Multis: 7/10
Wordplay 9/10

Overall: 8/10


Vote: Real Thorough

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Real Thorough gets mty vote easily. he lil suspect by way of k.o. why waste a good verse on this chump? don't know wbut it was a nice verse Real Thorough. try not to write so many lines next time b/c truly you only needed the first 15. other than dat you only need improvement on structure. nice multi's and pucnhes.

vote=Real Thorough

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I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

Real Thorough wins this battle easly...........he took every catagory except for strcutre.......you need to work on your structre a little bit and after that you should be all good.......your pucnhes was hot and they hit hard......your metas was good and you had a couple of multis in there......keep elevating pc

vote=Real Thorough

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Suspect
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 6/10

ReaL
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 7/10

v/ ReaL

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lets see realthorough man u had a kick ass start and a kick ass finish so my vote goes to u realthorough.
check out this battle iight
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127385