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Old 05-26-04, 01:48 AM   #16
RumpleSmoothspin
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Allight
his only ACTION is wit guys, chin 2 they sack son//
this fag goes down harder than the titanic captain//
Good punch and personal...... liked the 2cond line..... ima give that a 6/10
hotsauce, couldn't heat up the words that u spit//
wit rhymes like that u couldn't blow up if u sucked a vertical dick//
haha smart shit.... again the 2cond line hitt harder...... 7/10
he says his occupation is to eat emcees, but he spoke 2 fast like ricans, ho so please//
those weren't rappers, it was dick that gave u that throat desease//
haha niceness.... nice punch again had me laughin.... 7.5/10
he sits alone n his house, wit no life holdin his mouse//
but u clicked on the wrong 1 so i'mma strike on all u have like i tried 2 bowl n ur house//
feelin the punch.... but the second line doesnt flow well with the first... 5/10
i'mma finish this shit n end him wit this//
take my advise 4 ur lyrical, use more than just syllables r u'll need a miracle bitch//
its ooookkk but ya other lines were better.... ima give this a 6.5/10

Points::::::::::::::::32/50

Action
RB Watch Closely As I Snap This Fiend cuz every punch I Pack Is Mean..
This guy couldn't Spit Flames wit A Light and a Mouthful of Gasoline.. (Aillight)
first line was aight... the second one was hottness..... 6/10
This Hoes Trash and the only time he Hittin Wit Blades when he Mows-Grass..
And Aillight's Moms gotta be from Jersey the way her Legs Throwback..
Whoa... hardest punch in this whole battle... nice flow too..... 8/10
Just give up fam, Throw In The Towel before I Choke Ya Wit Vowels..
And put a hole big as Globe In Ya Bauer, son can get Roasted for Hours..
feelin it... nice punches..... 7/10
Ya Hope I'll Devour cuz I eat styles and straight up Slay Any Beef..
Leave ya White Tee red like you Play On The Chiefs, I Pray On the Weak..
Second line doesnt flow too well and the punch was average.... 6/10
Homie claimed to be ill, and I forgive you even tho you was Wrong To Lie..
But next time I'ma leave more Metal In Ya Face then that Rodman Guy..
LoL..... nice second line... feelin the punch and flow.... 7.5/10

Points:::::::::::34.5

OVeral:::: let me break it down a little bit...
Flow:Tie
Punches: i was feelin actions more....
Personals: both had them.... actions was stronger
Wordplay:dunt think any of u had it.. (looks through)
Humour:LMao... both had me laughin but these 2 lines were the funniest

This Hoes Trash and the only time he Hittin Wit Blades when he Mows-Grass..
And Aillight's Moms gotta be from Jersey the way her Legs Throwback.. Lol

Overal:::: ACtion....~~

BUT Close battle as u can see from the points...~1~
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Net ReCoRd===== 19-0-8
rapbattle record== 1-0-1
 
Old 05-26-04, 02:14 AM   #17
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I was feelin' Actions more... better punches and rhyme structure... other dude had some strong points, but his bars went off too far and fucked up his flow...

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Old 05-26-04, 01:52 PM   #18
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Action had better multies and harder punches...aight was jus like his name aight nothign hit hard to em and his flow fell of in a couple of spots

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