dawg you should never fuckin talk, you should be like mr. bean.
Cuz yo game so fuckin stale, you need some listerene
And yo game is like pebbles, while im rollin them boulders
And yo shit is flakin so bad, you need some Head and Shoulders.
And I am standin up here packin all my punches and kicks.
but I see you at the park, packin lunches and dicks.
Dawg I think you need a tip, cuz I got all the fuckin trix.
you should start a fuckin battle at the Special Olympics.
And you still wouldn’t win, cuz you just no good at rappin.
And I bet a guy could even beat ya speakin Pig Latin!

First of all^^^that is simple..straight up..i can't even believe this battle is 4-4..thats newb shit..no metas..no complexity in rhyme scheme..punches not creative...not close..1

He Only Cum Hard When He Grabs Cock, Sorry But I Don't Care If Ya Whole Family Offended.. 5
Hit U Wit MASS Shots And Best Believe I Aint Talkin Bout The School Camby Attended.. 6
if u know ya NCAA ball that is sick & CREATIVE!

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yo uppin fo votes ya'll, help me put this one away

ight i agree with the man above me

Jacket's Verse was very simple to me too simple......he had one tight line which was that fractions line but thats it...

Action's verse had wordplay, creativity and better punches

vote = action

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first off let me say PIMP RAWB is a HOMO for being a no show at our battle

Damn this is pretty close...I still don't know whom I'm gonna vote for... but we'll find out when I break it down...

Both yall verses really consisted of 3-4 bars

Action


Jacket


the rest of it was just blah...and filler lines

I think both of your decent personals evenly match up

Personals:Tied
Structure: Jacket (I hate when people number their lines)
Flows:Jacket
Complexity:Action, for the few lines that were good
Punches:Jacket

v/ Jacket even though I expected more from Action