Ight You Requested The Battle call So you drop first
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no crew votes
no hate votes

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Lines Crush Ya 'n' Make Ya Appendix Burst In Ya Nutsack, Ya Rhymes Are Crap So I Flush You Like Ya Came From An Ass Crack/

Fourmost aka Verb

ayo, killing you bitch is my goal, to end your life in a tradgedy//
putting each contact adressed in a mutha fuckin cemetary//
im-a-spit-fucker, makin-people-quit, like retirein u b4 to old//
im a lyrical demen slayer, your like an underdog sleepin playa/
got no brain waves, bump into mine power blasting like a rave/
i'll stop you growing, stop you stunned and parolysed loseing//
feel my flow it'll melt you down vapourising, as if i was the sun//
im gonna break through you like a million metal objects stabbin you/
leaving your body in a heap telling your boys your just sleeping//
im a outrageous human bein, putting you down instantly without blinkin//

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yo yo yo, i am like tupac cuz of rhymez/
and lyrikaly i can beat-you-up-criminally//
i am a killer and you cant sway me/
because man brendas got a baby// (dope)
can u imagine me being less then the dopest man/~
hell no dawg, cuz im almost as dope as 50 cent man//

Ight I stretched my bars a bit so i didn't spit the full amount of bars

Dis Cat Gone Nuts Without Bolts The Way He Come At Me/Ya Left Lickin Tha Butts Of Colts 'n' Get Sprayed Wit Shit 'n' Pee/1
Neva Mentioned My Name So I'm Wonderin If Thats Urs//Give Ya Neck A Hyperextension So Fuck You And Ya Dragqueen Whores//2

/Choppin Fine Mind So Call Me Hannible Lectre/ Snap Crackle 'n' Poppin wit Devine Lines 'n' Turn To A Cannibal Spectre/3
//This Male Anal Investigator Got A Loud Bark But No Bite// Fail To Contest Like A Old Man Wit False Teeh In This Fight//4

/Comin Up Short In More Ways Than One, Ya Midget Dick Not Reachin Tha Pussy Port,Ya Hot Dog Can't Make Tha Bun/5
//Stun Wit High Voltage Tazers, Only Pussy You Get Comes In Tons That Needs Lawn~mowers To Act Like Razors//6

/Cage Dis Player Cuz His Rhymes Are Ugly As Beast/ Almost As Nasty When Ya Munch Ya Moms Infection Of The Yeast/7
//Increased Toll Of Tha Deceased As Soon As The Poll Is Realeased//Wit Knucklesanwiches For Ya Final Feast//8

Vote up!

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Lines Crush Ya 'n' Make Ya Appendix Burst In Ya Nutsack, Ya Rhymes Are Crap So I Flush You Like Ya Came From An Ass Crack/

Fourmost aka Verb

Best Of Seven Votes
3-0 For KO
Please Explain All Votes
Thanx!!

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Lines Crush Ya 'n' Make Ya Appendix Burst In Ya Nutsack, Ya Rhymes Are Crap So I Flush You Like Ya Came From An Ass Crack/

Fourmost aka Verb

Uppin Cuz This Gettin Slept On Hard
plz Explain Usin This
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punches-
personals-
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overall-

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Lines Crush Ya 'n' Make Ya Appendix Burst In Ya Nutsack, Ya Rhymes Are Crap So I Flush You Like Ya Came From An Ass Crack/

Fourmost aka Verb

aight here we go

Multis-four
Flow-both
Punches-four
Personals-four
Creativity-four
wordplay-four
overall-ma vote fourmost wun be ez nice drop finemind

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Multis-fine
Flow-four
Punches-four
Personals-four
Creativity-four
wordplay-four
overall-four

Ight Uppin 2-0 Zip But One Of Them Forgot To VOTE ONTHE POLE

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Lines Crush Ya 'n' Make Ya Appendix Burst In Ya Nutsack, Ya Rhymes Are Crap So I Flush You Like Ya Came From An Ass Crack/

Fourmost aka Verb

I Smell A KO Uppin Yall Stop Sleepin , More Votes!!

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Lines Crush Ya 'n' Make Ya Appendix Burst In Ya Nutsack, Ya Rhymes Are Crap So I Flush You Like Ya Came From An Ass Crack/

Fourmost aka Verb

ayo, killing you bitch is my goal, to end your life in a tradgedy//
putting each contact adressed in a mutha fuckin cemetary//
this was a weak opener, it had a weak flow and the punch wasn't very good either
im-a-spit-fucker, makin-people-quit, like retirein u b4 to old//
im a lyrical demen slayer, your like an underdog sleepin playa/
got no brain waves, bump into mine power blasting like a rave/
i'll stop you growing, stop you stunned and parolysed loseing//
feel my flow it'll melt you down vapourising, as if i was the sun//
im gonna break through you like a million metal objects stabbin you/
leaving your body in a heap telling your boys your just sleeping//
im a outrageous human bein, putting you down instantly without blinkin//
the rest doesn't flow at all, you missspelled alot, its just all in all not good,- No solid punchlines, no good wordplay- try and check out some of the tutorials here and get a better grasp on what ur tryin to do..

/Choppin Fine Mind So Call Me Hannible Lectre/ Snap Crackle 'n' Poppin wit Devine Lines 'n' Turn To A Cannibal Spectre/3
//This Male Anal Investigator Got A Loud Bark But No Bite// Fail To Contest Like A Old Man Wit False Teeh In This Fight//4

/Comin Up Short In More Ways Than One, Ya Midget Dick Not Reachin Tha Pussy Port,Ya Hot Dog Can't Make Tha Bun/5
//Stun Wit High Voltage Tazers, Only Pussy You Get Comes In Tons That Needs Lawn~mowers To Act Like Razors//6

I just quoted a couple verses here-- This was much better it actually had punchlines in it, a decent flow good wordplay-- the struc was a little strange but it was consistent- Your opponent should try and elevate to this level at least very quickly.... Vote - Fourmost

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yo dis battle wuz str8 but i think 4 had da uppa hand so i'm gonna give it to him but da otha guy wuz ight so stay up

vote=four

Multis-four
Flow-both
Punches-four
Personals-four
Creativity-four
wordplay-four
overall-fourmost

he had betta punches v/ fourmost

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please return the favor link in sig

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Dats A KO Already But Uppin For More Votes I Guess

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Lines Crush Ya 'n' Make Ya Appendix Burst In Ya Nutsack, Ya Rhymes Are Crap So I Flush You Like Ya Came From An Ass Crack/

Fourmost aka Verb