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06-09-04, 03:22 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Revengence
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Um been patiently waiting fa a nigga ta start hating
if ma gun up 2 ya head nigga aint no escaping, Fuck wit me, n u aint gone never see da end Like Tony Montana,say hello to my little friend No one aint fucked wit me up 2 dis day Except da bitches on hea,but ya'll web freaks n eway We dun care but nuttin cus none of ya'll please us We dont care who u are even if ya jesus Submitted by Dr.Flow n MMR |
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06-09-04, 10:11 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: A10D 4933
I liked the way u kept it gangsta thru the whole thing. My advice is to expand on your words and topics. Get creative with it like say I Scarfaces like Tony Montana.... You know flip it a little and give it some feeling. If you just work at it You'll get better.... you have to it's just nature. Keep doin wut ur doin.
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