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Old 06-08-04, 08:03 PM   #16
KISI
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uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!
 
Old 06-08-04, 09:25 PM   #17
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I’m brawlic, brawl you for quarters, call this a warnin//
I’m the safest nigga in prison, call me the warden//
I use ‘black ink’ slipped in syringes to penetrate//
So you ‘take shots’ of my text, till ya liver dissentagrates// - Humerous opener, you've brought some funny punches here, used some different types of wordplay, I really felt the Inheritance line later on in the verse also... This wasn't the best I've seen you drop but still a good verse, I felt most of your punches and I think you were able to pull off higher complexity than your opponent here.


Im schoolin u...n im surprised u could find the nerve
cuz im the director...n ill show u theres action behind my words - I think this was your best bar of your verse, the punch was decent and the wordplay wasn't played, the rest of the verse however I found kind of basic, it had a good structure but the punchlines were very simple, and concepts I've seen before-- Decent Verse all in all but I think Maku came harder here... Good luck in the future.
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Old 06-08-04, 09:37 PM   #18
KISI
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maku=2
blaq ink=0

uppin 4 votes...............
 
Old 06-12-04, 01:27 PM   #19
Ravage
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good battle

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not trying to hate or dick ride maku jaillin, but black i think he took you on this one.. not saying your shit suck, he just ahd nothing but punchs left and right..

vote maku
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Old 06-12-04, 01:28 PM   #20
Ravage
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good battle

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not trying to hate or dick ride maku jaillin, but black i think he took you on this one.. not saying your shit suck, he just ahd nothing but punchs left and right..i thought blacks flowed together better, but black gotta remeber punches with battles

vote maku
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Old 06-21-04, 09:03 PM   #21
KISI
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uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 06-21-04, 09:16 PM   #22
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I like maku's style. i'll vote on ya'll two in a sec
 
Old 06-22-04, 12:18 AM   #23
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[IMG]www.suicidemethods.net/ pix/thurston.jpg[/IMG] I FUCKED YOUR MUM
 
Old 06-22-04, 12:21 AM   #24
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Old 06-22-04, 01:20 AM   #26
M-Eazy
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damn...mad props to ya'll both that was hot...one of the best yet, that i read...not too short, not too long, thats perfect...i hate doing al that reading...but imma give it up to maku...his was hotter, he/she had me droppn mi jaw on some shit...blaq, u did too...GOOD SHIT.

v/maku
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Old 06-22-04, 06:24 PM   #27
KISI
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uppin 4 votes
thanks for the props everyone, lets continue
 
Old 06-22-04, 10:23 PM   #28
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Lol...Maku Got This One..He Just Str8 Killed Blaq Man...Maku Just Had Harder Punches Which Knocked Blaq Off His Feet 'N' Shit..The Flow Was Good..And Tha Structure Was Ok..But My Vote Goes To Maku..Cuz He Just Str8 Killed It In There Man...

V/ Maku
 
 


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