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06-27-04, 01:20 AM
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New to RB
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Love So Much(love Poem)
IP: 3240 794D
Of All Girls Ive Ever Meet
Youre The One I Cant Foreget God Picked You From All The Rest Becuase He Knew I Loved You Best Your Heart Is Like A Pot Of Gold So Hard To Find So Hard To Hold I Had A Heart Once And It Was True But Now Its Gone From Me To You Takecare Of It As I Have Done Cause Now You Two And I Have None If I Get To Heaven And Your Not There Ill Wait For You By The Golden Stairs If Your Not There On Judgement Day Ill Know You Went The Other Way Ill Give Back The Crown The Angels And Wings And Just To Prove My Love Is True Ill Go To Hell To Be With You |
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06-30-04, 10:31 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: DB8D 5EE9
Damn...kid...dat is hott...showed alot of emotion an ain't scared to post it fa da public...very nice poem...i give dat shyt a 10/10
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06-30-04, 11:18 PM
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Jumpin' Along
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IP: C56C 93CC
iight it was decent .... but it could have been better...
nice emotion ..nice imagery...
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07-16-04, 02:08 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: EC0B 84C7
It Was A Nice Poem I'm Going To Agree With Lnj It Could Of Been Better But It Was Really Good
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