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07-04-04, 08:05 PM
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Middle Weight
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Dreams
IP: 4F10 1B86
check out this new track i did in tha studio, its called dreams
www.soundclick.com/freshemcee some feedback plz -1-
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Biggie got killed when the shit gon' stop" Layzee Bone, Change Tha World "With every dark night, there's a bright day after that"
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07-06-04, 05:24 AM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 4F10 1B86
uppin fo some feedback ya'll, dun sleep on this
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"First we lost Eazy, then we lost Pac
Biggie got killed when the shit gon' stop" Layzee Bone, Change Tha World "With every dark night, there's a bright day after that"
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07-07-04, 01:11 AM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 4F10 1B86
come on uppin..dun sleep on this
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"First we lost Eazy, then we lost Pac
Biggie got killed when the shit gon' stop" Layzee Bone, Change Tha World "With every dark night, there's a bright day after that"
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07-08-04, 04:52 AM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 4F10 1B86
uppin come on peeps dun sleep on this. wanna get some feedbak on this track
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"First we lost Eazy, then we lost Pac
Biggie got killed when the shit gon' stop" Layzee Bone, Change Tha World "With every dark night, there's a bright day after that"
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07-09-04, 08:05 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 4F10 1B86
fark man, i want some feedbak on this...uppin this muthafuka
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"First we lost Eazy, then we lost Pac
Biggie got killed when the shit gon' stop" Layzee Bone, Change Tha World "With every dark night, there's a bright day after that"
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07-12-04, 07:30 AM
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Middle Weight
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IP: FC18 01E0
come on ya'll dont sleep on this, its a hot track. uppin fo some feedback
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"First we lost Eazy, then we lost Pac
Biggie got killed when the shit gon' stop" Layzee Bone, Change Tha World "With every dark night, there's a bright day after that"
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07-14-04, 09:29 AM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: D666 F54C
yo first off... fuck everybody else for not listenin to this-----
iight heres a little critique-- no hate involved. On the intro it sound kinda like you tryin to hard to talk to the beat instead of talkin from ya heart--- but then again you from australia if that shits true-- then maybe its a culture thing or just a difference in accent-- whatever--- The cat singin the hook sounds like he got a voice, but his vocals are too low for me to understand to well cuz he's hittin the same notes as the beat so they mesh--- flow wise I think you got the idea, there was some emotion to your voice though it didn't come through very strong, I could see you were rhymin alot without it really soundin like rhymin if that makes sense to you, its like you weren't emphasizing the same sounds in the same places, just work on that-- I think your lyrics were on point and I felt the topic- keep doin this, get better-- stay up... 1
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07-14-04, 08:01 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: FC18 01E0
thanks fo tha feedbak...uppin for mo ppl
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"First we lost Eazy, then we lost Pac
Biggie got killed when the shit gon' stop" Layzee Bone, Change Tha World "With every dark night, there's a bright day after that"
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07-15-04, 11:55 PM
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.:So~So~Good:.
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IP: 75B6 C69F
The singing part should have been left out because the dude can't sing and you can't understand what he is saying.Your voice should have been louder then the beat because the beat is over ya voice.The lyrics were good.Your flow & delivery was good.Overall a pretty good audio,except that damn course.That shit is horrible.Also I didn't really like that ending.But other than that I give it a 8/10.
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07-16-04, 02:50 AM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 83BA 2DA0
thanks man..well chorus volume shud hav bin louder.sounded aiight on tha guyz speakers wen we got it recorded but oh well...thanks man
uppin fo some mo feedbak
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"First we lost Eazy, then we lost Pac
Biggie got killed when the shit gon' stop" Layzee Bone, Change Tha World "With every dark night, there's a bright day after that"
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07-18-04, 07:30 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: FC18 01E0
uppin fo a few more comments, come on
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"First we lost Eazy, then we lost Pac
Biggie got killed when the shit gon' stop" Layzee Bone, Change Tha World "With every dark night, there's a bright day after that"
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07-23-04, 05:01 PM
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New to RB
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IP: 4289 77F4
Hey Wats Really Good Its Da Vinchi
I Mean Its Real Good If Ur Into That Type Of Rap I Mean Personally I Wouldnt Bump It Cause I Mean Im More Gansta Rapper But It Had A Good Message And Evry Thing Keep Doin It Lyrics Were Hard Come Wit Tha Gansta Boy Hollaback If U Wanna Here Sumthin Gansta I Can Send To U Thru Email Is That Cool |
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