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| Biggie_XL |
  
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1 | 16.67% |
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5 | 83.33% |
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07-15-04, 10:23 PM
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Biggie_XL vs Smoke
IP: 620A 971B
no d/r
no crew votes no explaining lines 10 lines min 15 line max verse due 20 min's after check in......
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07-15-04, 11:07 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 5043 32F4
ok we gona finsh this in 30 my brotha wants tha computer
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07-15-04, 11:48 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 5043 32F4
ok well check in no 20 min alrite lets do this shit aiight
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07-15-04, 11:51 PM
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^ War Sergeant ^
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IP: 620A 971B
aight........checkin in...i'mma drop right after u
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07-16-04, 12:02 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 5043 32F4
well y'all ready to hear a spit starit form the B-I-G to tha G-I-E
cuz i mic and som beat and my fanatci is all a fella needs cuz now it time to match witts with tha Smoke sreen and after this shit this fool will turn envey green cuz wit ma 2 fist ill kill this lame excuse fo an emcee cuz this fagget hear can't spit a rhyme what will evan some close to bend me cuz ill have tha motha fucka areal line then i Cock and next think ya now what left of him is lined in chalk cua ill spit thid like bad boy cuz i ma special delivery and fo this fagget i wont pull ouy ma cavelrie cuz ill i nee ma 2 fist and a mic in hand and thin emcee dead like Da Band cuz see this is that shit were i prevail kill a bitch wit baseball bat and nail im unthouch able cuz shit gon phase me i spit like this and it make people Swazy first battle aiight it may not be great
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07-16-04, 12:04 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 5043 32F4
fuck im pissed i didn't look at ma spellin i type so fast i make so much fucking mistakes
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07-16-04, 12:18 AM
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IP: 620A 971B
I just seen lights flast before my eyes it was a unforgettable time
Cuz I almost died from laughin' too hard after I read your first line I'mma give u some tips since this ya first, and I'm keepin it real Invest in a nice rag, some turtle wax and go polish ya skills Stay in class don't drop out Biggie please u need to stay in school Take a look at the rules 10 - 15 lines for your verse you illiterate fool We just started and I passed ya I’m bout to set the nitro- off Biggie you wouldn’t “XL” if u was the programmer of Micro~soft (get it) How does it feel to live a life and know u a coward But can’t do nothin’ bout it cuz your dumb ass allow-it
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07-16-04, 12:21 AM
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^ War Sergeant ^
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IP: 620A 971B
shit!!! in the first line "flast" is suppose to be flash
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07-16-04, 12:27 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 5043 32F4
i would correct my mistakes but i would just half to re rite ma hole verse man im stupid
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07-16-04, 08:30 AM
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^ War Sergeant ^
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IP: 620A 971B
uppin for some votes..................................
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07-16-04, 02:19 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 5043 32F4
im uppin some votes.............................
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07-16-04, 02:32 PM
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Just Another DipSet
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IP: 4289 77F4
break down
opener:smoke punches:Smoke flow:smoke structure:smoke vocab:smoke wordplay:none personals:both closer:smoke overall:smokeskreen i'll finish my vote when you vote on this battle http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=135192
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07-16-04, 03:59 PM
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New to RB
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IP: 5043 32F4
starting: BIGGIE ending:Smoke Punches: none Dissed: Both Sturture: Smoke rhymes: Biggie you both did pretty godd but i liked biggie style better vote goes to biggie |
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07-16-04, 04:22 PM
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New to RB
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IP: 8E70 C31B
opener:smoke
punches:Smoke flow:smoke structure:smoke vocab:smoke personals:smoke closer:smoke overall:smokeskreen one sided battle, Biggie u didnt come to well.
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07-16-04, 08:00 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 9409 16AF
yoyoyo, my nigga smokescreen jus demolished this nigga Biggie.... he had me laughin the whole way thru.... Biggie need sum work and only had one good line, while smoke spit hard bars and kept the whole thing interesting
winner..... $MOKESKREEN
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