Hook
Geuss we're ending with this past lost in a maze//
must be waiting for kindness ment from faith//
i'd love to see but i guess its time to free mah ways//
ur'll know i love you but thats jus a day a life can change//
free myself an change my ways//

verse 1
his eyes fell like he spent the las dime to find who was in the mirror lookin 4 who was fighten an it grew risin like the tide//
looked back inside this devil an his pride dressed like the person with the demon jus disguised to pas time from life to make the lie shine//
he walked talked the thug but deep inthought never asked this life~so the lie finds~a place in the tears as the nights prie he held his daughter an cry'd//
he knew he'd probaly never see again~kissed her forhead an told her not follow his ways~its dazed an pained for blood an shame this race is caged but to rise above this rage//
she asked if her daddy who's sad speach was the lonesome hauntin of goodbye~he looked deep in her eyes~told her then fly above the skys in the everlasting afterlife//
then he took his nine~to go an fight for his her life//

Hook
Geuss we're ending with this past lost in a maze//
must be waiting for kindness ment from faith//
i'd love to see but i guess its time to free mah ways//
ur'll know i love you but thats jus a day a life can change//
free myself an change my ways//

verse 2
geuss he knew he'd what he'd lose with change~askin what point yah can't miss more than thiss//
trick nothing with bliss to the seal the deal of the devils ownin ur soul so you can play like the ultamite shit//
so he walked with the homies left to do~they walked together with guns shaking like they knew they through//
street talks tough so what else to do~fight as the gangster only to lay up in the casket so tha rep stays koo//
he help the braclet of his daughters watched as death came rolling by~he ran blazing the darkness of the street as his life passed by//
thought bought his first love first kiss the first time his daught latch her hand onto his finger an that became the moment he vowed never to bring her up like him//
without a job he not in fulliment to the promise~so he made a living not exactly stickin to it honest~so his only baby could get the toys an that~he was hustling at the corner with a 9mm an sum crack//
took out accidently a passing customer~why~ the custa pulled at him nine pressed up against his face~he throw him to the floor to take him out what it would take~till our boys homie shot the mugger in his face//
our boy know the shit cryin half the night~now the muggers brother went to pull the trigger for the witness of the fathers passing by//
one thing he thought jus before he died//

Hook
Geuss we're ending with this past lost in a maze//
must be waiting for kindness ment from faith//
i'd love to see but i guess its time to free mah ways//
ur'll know i love you but thats jus a day a life can change//
free myself an change my ways//

verse 3
and within the final second like a passing the minds~he knew there was person to say goodbye//
never before as my smile so glowed as that first second wen your ur life started and ur star was jus born//
ur every emotion like notions of hoping ur'd be my every thought~and now i'm falling the waters down fall into the secrets of everything deep down we know//
ur smile forever printed in the mind of my all the while the everypassing second i'll be there as your air for the life ur lead an the moment you walk down the isle//
and every tear that rolls so gently down the sweetly crafted eyes like gates of your soul throw two windows on ur face//
but don't walk down my way off this maze~for me its to late~the mistake just took place now i face forever to watch over your ways//
~~he fell to the floor like the second the beat stopped an the pain raced~like all misery erased with the braclet placed over his wrists the streets holla's another gangster thugs take//

dayummmmmmmmm
i loved this piece....really nice work kid......Nice imagery and all....flwo was on point....multis were there...vocab was there...and ya Scheme and story line was perfect......shit was mad NICE.....big UPs to you homie...nice shit

9/10mics

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ayo thanx homie, dayum blazin review cheers mayne

dats shit long as shit reminds me of me when i write good song yo keep droppin peep my new free write jus posted holla back peace

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ok how can a piece of paper have flow? seriously i c it all tha time? how can words have flow? u cant hear it physically so how can it flow...

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dam these fuckin cocky reality bashin cock sucker piss me off.
u rap along to it with wot ever beat plays sweetly in ur bedroom

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ayo thanx raw, i like yah stuff on here homie, if u wanna collab holla would be koo.

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that was hot man! at least there's SOME people on here who know the meaning of the words "creativity" and "originality". real emotional man, nice song.

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ayo thanx Cerulean nice review man, much love.
peace

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that was real nice shit man. A lotta creativity and a good story to it.

thanx lilkay much love

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