ok
house rules
blind spit
verses due in 1 hour from now..
any longer and its a d/q

gud luk

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ive seen sum of dis bitches battles..she couldnt rhyme a verse for shit..
you must be high on "extasy"..coz u sound like ja-rule the way u spit!..
like a ladder wit rungs-split, u lacking the elevation to cum-wit-wit..
if u woz really captain of the ship youd be sinking fast wit-ya-sides-split!..
now i dnt need to mess about, u lookin like a firework that fizzled-out..
you couldnt "flow smoothly"..if you spat your verse from a spout!...
this gurl a student..but you wouldnt think it..the way she spits..
kinda bitch,thatd be happy to get aids,so she can claim to be sick!..
only time this girl above me..woz when in an aeoroplane she flew..
her crew "the next level"..i guess its true...THEM compared to you!..

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you fucking slut gatta watch wherre you aim/ima pop nun' but bullets in ya brain
u just a fucking newbie/better quit now 'fore u get kicked by d dick of an admin..
you aint fucking up to my level,after my rushing you,you gonna take me as ur model..
my lines gon be like sleeping tablets,so u lay down b4 ur stupidness dosent turn into madness
i see you as a clunky ass dork..your lines easily slip down my fork..cos they just like u stinking like a porck...

i guess u watch too much of will&grace..therre aint no les in this place ur presence is nothing but a disgrace...

manipulation..ur wanting to win is just an halusination..its time for ur resignation..ur painted a looser after what i mention...

i had to rush that...o well thats all i got for now cos i gatta go....peace

uppin.........

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This battle was alright.

Manipulation: I like how u refered to her other verses that was kinda clever inputting that in tha verse. A few good punches. Intro was good, but the ending sucked.



XXX: when i read you verse I was like what the hell is she talking about? The structure kinda killed the flow of your verse and your punches weren't too good.


Voye: Manipulation

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Manipulation - Flow Was Ok, If You Worded It Better It Would Have Flowed Better, Also Better Structure Which Led To Hard Hitting Punches Than Xxxtasy.... Wordplay Was Played... But Overal Ok Verse...

XxXtasy- Structure Was Bad, Punches Didnt Hit As Hard As Manip, And Flow Was A Little Off, Try To Fix Your Structure And It Would Have Flowed Better, Also Try To Hit Harder Punches.. Overal Eh Verse.. Not As Good As Manip'z

Punches-Manip
Flow- Manip
Metaz- Niether
Multis- Niether
Vocab- Xxxtasy
Structure- Manip
Wordplay- Manip
Originality- Tie

Final Vote- Manip

uppin............................................. .

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uppin

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yo x shit aint even rhyme at all.what was that a angry poem?this is a rap battle not a talking shit section.i gotta give it to the manupilation cuz her verse was actually a rap and her disses were better




i only vote honestly so yall niggas vote honestly on my battle with daillest

Manipulation : flow was good u had way better punches/diss that hit harder and was more effective in this battle which made me like haha and was a good read and u was way better with creativeness

X: ya verse was slackin flow i mean it was there but just not that good u feel me like it aint run that smoth and ya punches i was woundering when i was gonna see one try hitting hard with those u will do batter with them and ya creativeness was slackin as-well im just trying to give u pointer on what u need to fix aight dogs but just work on it...

vote: Manipulation

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137344
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137050
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135788
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136956
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137349
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137451


can u plez vote on some of them...

now i agree with every one on here xxxtasy u may be my g/f n all but damn i gotta give dat 2 manipulation i see i gotta teach u quicker than i though dotn hate on da chick though people she tryin she jus started recently n manip how da hell u gonna battle x n blacklist her 2 vote in ur battles? ur a retard i see sum1 or sumtin got u gased up lol over all x work on da whole flow manip still good but not enough keep it up

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lmmao n now i see i cant vote on ur rhyme u really r a bitch lookin 4 beefcryin at first no beef but damn sucks 4 u manip i was votin 4 u dumbass fuck u slut when im not so busy ima get yo ass n serve u

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raw killa...you couldnt serve shit on a platter, so shut the fuck up

Manip-some good punches, used multis..i like that, not many personals..woulda liked to see more, but overall good battle..nice structure n flow, big points

Xxxstasy-waaack, bad structure which totally messed with the flow, no hard punches, definitely need some elevation...not many personals...id say the only thing you had him in was the vocab..

Vote: Manip for comin harder

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