rules:

house rules

3-0 is ko

10-16 lines max

u spit first

spit due 30 min afta check in

check in now

ha,ya using a alias...??ya not a newbie......fuck it im checkin in......

wtf???alias???wtf???

aight sorry dawg i'll sapit in like 3 min aight....i was busy..

sorry dawg,,jus spit tonight

this cat sports more~stretch’d lines~than a pregnant grandma,
useless like a ~lynched mind~or a women with a sewed vagina,

you jus a bubble gum ‘wrapper’ stuck ta anothers sole like ‘chingy’,
getting stepped n’picked on’cause real lyricists don’t take U seriously,

your jus a~try hard on this art~ya’d have better luck written in da dark,
here borrow this line~for a spark~its my worst shit,it’ll be ya very best start,

ya jus a ~post failure~I consecutively spit my verse in ~post modern~,
my threads are~most original~while u’re a print getting pressed wit a burn,

I’ve stated my iq was’nt a number but a sound,im da meanest genius,
650 could’nt ‘cum’~a-head~if ya grabbed da~nob of my big penis~..

Ayo,there Ain't No Feeding Of My Verse In This Battle "right"cause That Shits Wack.........

first of all...im a guy..ight???

imma go easy on u...also..i know i ain't a newb...like i sed...im a lil rusty cuz i haven't spit or rhymed at all for 3 months straight..ight??here i go...

shut up!!you ain't a emcee, cuz u talk more like da innocent//
na fuck dat, i can't understand you, u sound more like a imagrant//
right at dis very moment i wonder why u wasted my time??//
Cuz i wasted my lines on a nigga dat cant' even rhyme//
Shyt!I'd might as well use my rhymes on someone dats mute//
Cuz literally, after hearin ur rhymes, they sound iller then you//
Fuck!!!jst leave da RB, cuz u nothin more den jst dirt//
If you were, u'd be sold at a one dollar store cuz dats all u really worth//

uppin votes

umm,ok dude i never implied you were a chick in my verse,i was compairin your lines ta stretch marks...and your uselessness ta a chick with a sewed up pussy....

ayo,uppin for votes

it goes to 650 cuz dv8 only rhmymed in 2 bars and his only hot bar was the 1st one and that aint rhmyme.i liked 650 verse but it wasnt hot i cant even remember it 2 seconds later but at least it rhymed that nigga dv8 do rhyme like a immigrant

i didn't really likes 6-50's
flow dat much so ima give it
2 DV8 cuz his flow had punches
dat work n he came alot stronger
v/DV8
vote 4 deez batlles
amayze vs novakane
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749

2hard2lose
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487

peace

Break Down I

Dv8- Ok Verse, Structure Was Good, Had Some Metaz, Wordplay Was Ok, Punches Were Alright, Overal Ok Verse....


6-50- Structure Was Good, Punches Didnt Hit Very Hard, Flowed Decent..... No Metaz Wordplay Or Personals....



Break Down II
Punches- Dv8
Personals- Niether
Flow- 6-50
Wordplay- Dv8
Multis- Niether
Metaphors- Dv8
Structure- 6-50
Originality- Dv8
Vocab- 6-50

Final Vote- Dv8

Return Favor And Honest Vote On This:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137726

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uppin for votes,please add them........................

Yo i gotta give it to DV8 jus cuz he had better punchez and a good flow. 6-50 yo punchez was kinda weak but keep elevatin playa. Anyway Dv8 had dis.

vote honestly
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137788 me vs. ibraheem
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137782 me vs. amayze

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Flow-dv8
Punchez-dv8
WordPlay-dv8
Vocab-dv8
Multis-neither
structure 6-50
v/dv8