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MR.WASHINGTON 0 0%
SONIC 5 100.00%
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Old 08-03-04, 09:44 PM   #19
A.M.O.K
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Voted For: SONIC

SONIC
You must be Silly going against the kid with the Ill Speech
Coz U'r like Herion, I'll relentlessly abuse you, even if it Kills Me
Not too bad
U spit Toxic waist, yo rhymes are Killin Me, what a Misery
We'll call you Mr. George Washington, coz after this U'r History
Not too bad again, could of flipped it better
My Mystic as an MC will Leave You Empty if U Temp Me
I'mma Cut ya Tounge off next time u try to Spit Against Me
That's alright
Yo Rhymes Are Dry, Yo Kind Should Die, Y do U Try To Fly?
Even If U were Thomas Eddison U couldn't Find Ya "Shine"
uGh, don't get it, who's Eddison?
U'r Flow is Slow, I Roll Past you So Fast
You're like a kid out in the Summer, I can tell u have No Class
Lol, pwetty good
You Broke bitch, I'm you're teacher, why are you Testin This?
U might be "Washington" but u don't got no Dead Presidents
iffy at best, could of flipped better
You ain't Goty It all, Apply the Damn Logic
In every battle i'll win, I'm SONIC, You're Dr. Robotnik
Lol, it's ok
He just Got Dissed, I'm much better Boys n Girls
I'm like an Asteriod, I came to Earth to Destroy his World
Not too bad
And leave an Impact, yo Been Whack, just Admit That
U could put a written verse in ya mouth n still can't Spit Raps
Nah playish
So give up you can't win, ....just LET IT GO, FACE IT
Coz if I miss, my words "come back" to hit u like ECHOLOCATION
Yeah it's alright

Consistent verse, few 'oh's & ah's', not many though, flow was on point, personals could of hit harder, but good verse nontheless

Mr.Washington
All ur good lines.... they must stay hid in yo brain....
shit... his kid got his rap name from a video game!
lol, could of had more impact
i've seen all ur lines..............and ur disses are played to
ur so weak, all the punches in the world couldnt save you!
Not too bad
u've got an attitude, so u know Wash gotta erase the mean
ur brains like D. Matthews cuz theres so much space between
huh?D.Matthews?Whos that?
I'm not even keepin count of how many lines I type.....
n my fists wont stop hittin ya dome untill ya mind is right!
Yeah it's ok, could of had more impact
In line n tight, you'll follow my every single order see....
n ur verses would look better, if they werent dis-orderly!
Lol, not too bad
cords n me, have sumthin in common we both strangle ya
ur like the banner... but missin stars cuz no1 spangled ya
Nah, could of flipped it better
hangin ya, no need for rope or noose my hands'll do....
shit..... all i need is a dreamcast paddle to handle you
LOL whoa...

Good verse, too bad you didn't match his lines.Flow was good, personals were aight, closure was hot.Not many wordplays & meta's, alot of straight disses.Good read though

V/SONIC;more consistent & punches, due to the obvious fact he had more lines.Washington had the best bar in the match(closure), but one bar don't win you battles.If he had matched SONIC's lines.... this would of been different.
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