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08-05-04, 07:11 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Hey gimme FEEDBACK on this one
IP: 9FB7 7C10
Yo yo yo my head sore hit it on the door not thinking drinking
Too much soda new car it’s a TOYOTA not good really Rhymes chilly long day so I spray a verse is this a Gift or a curse well what the hell but sleepy my neighbors Bit creepy so bored my raps got special affects like LORD OF THE RINGS I’m tall as YAO MING my style is versatile It’s the all of the oceans its flowing SLOW MOTION notions Of humor its just a rumor but got messed up cuz got a tumor Kidding I’m skidding ridding all wack shit quack spits Got me down so I clown around high school near then college Then a career damn whoa so I flow and kick back Learning BEATBOXING dawgs Xeroxing cuz they don’t rhyme I’m Using consonants and vowels spits wet as a towel My bowels grumbling I’m not mumbling people brash I’m low on cash want some hash browns face yellow Like my crown playing just spraying what comes to my mind Got a weird rhyme scheme chasing cream bracing for impact Its exact never early surly I can be but can’t I’m ANDYPANTS My nickname I got trickgame crawling brawling in my dome Its late still awake bleaching I’m breaching and saying My shit others teasing I’m breezing my metaphors is Earth peeps digging it my hair needs trimming life is brimming I’m skimming through the lines not winning not losing Leg feels like its bruising nowadays lot of bustle So I’m on the Hustle rap is a MILKYWAY when u spit It’s a pleasure you can’t measure it’s a treasure Spitting is wallow I’m callow fresh to def just bricking Ticking clicking with the beat not neat at all got yogurt On my shirt its DANNON my personals are a loose cannon Goes in every direction sharp as an injection a collection Of my own rhymes I’m impeding reading other pieces There dope but some like the POPE frail and old others cold My rhymes are glutton there phat popping like a button Candy in my cache its orange like CRASH BANDICOOT On the pursuit to recruit more MCs from the SURBARBS It ain’t GHETTO or SURPARB its MACOLM IN THE MIDDLE I’m daunted always wanted not glossing neither flossing Got the dap and gift to rap won’t be veering cuz I’m steering Can’t hear me cuz of the cheering my words stupefying Its amplifying DEF like 8 MILE my disses guile I’m Tsunami I’m precarious the shit I say is hilarious My skills mad it’s a psycho clone u don’t deserve The MICRO PHONE your prone to loss hey I’m the BOSS You’re IRAQ your falling to bad I’m a plane I’m Propelling straight accepleing I’m gelling Like DR. SHOLLS fo sho rhyme scheme hidden its camouflage You good that’s a mirage your dusty and rusty like my garage pc |
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08-09-04, 12:46 AM | #2 | ||||
$Thug Life$
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IP: F68E 94A8
nice man you have style
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