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Old 08-04-04, 08:40 PM   #1
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Just somethin i thru together

IP: 33D0 FCD7

give me a lil feed back

In these streets it’s hard to realize/
Looking thru distant eyes/
Cause genocide is why our mothers cry/
Brothas die but the street remains/
600 yrs of a slain slave/
It seems we aint capable to break the chain/
The face of the new generation won’t change/
When hatred is wealth/
An the night hides the stealth/
Look at what the hands of fate dealt/
Now going to jail makes you a man now/
See how it sounds simply unrashinel/
That’s why my mic is a hand held/
Project-in intellectual shrapnel/
To help brothas mix colors/
But how can we be one/
When the nature of man is to hate any one/
It seems we will never be at peace/
When half of you think you really free/
Cut off and numb wish-in for freedom/
But every day you prove you freely dumb/
Saving nations who worship which one/
If you looked at the sky/
Wont you'll see the same sun/
The same air to breathe/
Identical fish in the sea/
If you pricked a thousand emcees/
I guarantee each one would bleed.
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Smacked him in the head for trynna' roar at me"


"In the name of Hip-Hop niggas could corner me
Torture me, slice me then stitch me up like embroidery"
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Old 08-05-04, 02:24 PM   #2
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Kid everything about that was dope! Structure, Flow, Messsage, Wordplay: Real Hip Hop! I definitely could appreciate it! keep building!

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Old 08-05-04, 10:56 PM   #3
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yo thanx Barz uppin for more feed back ppl
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"I took a lion on tour wit' me, made him respect authority
Smacked him in the head for trynna' roar at me"


"In the name of Hip-Hop niggas could corner me
Torture me, slice me then stitch me up like embroidery"
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