Fuck you mask,,your mad because you cant write like me,,,,You bitch made nigga!!!

Copy right through ASCAP
Wrote by:5MICMEDALLION

good shit man...hella long...if u eva record that...make it a feature....shits too long

Thanks im writting a book of poetry,,,and this will be one of the pages in my book.
Im only trying to give people some thing to read thats all,,,,God bless all,,,1

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My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

Defeat list
Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
none

Can I see any more feed back people daum,,,
I know your all posting,,but when your done check this one out,,,
I have done my share of replies,,,can i get some now thanx...
God bless all

__________________
My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

Defeat list
Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
none

upping for feed back please....

__________________
My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

Defeat list
Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
none

I GUESS NOT,,,SEE IF I GIVE ANY REPLYS THEN.1
God bless all.

__________________
My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

Defeat list
Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
none

Who reads any more,,,I GUESS NO one,,

__________________
My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

Defeat list
Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
none

Woah you experienced alot of changes?

But what i dont understand is the WORD changes is suppos to be a very motional topic

but you were tlking about gangstas in mommas house....
Thats funny but you got the wrong topic to the name
This was very hood like but i dont know how to detarmn if this is a good piece without the right name dawg. . it's ok though not to complex vocab whch i like because some things can be confusing i think you need write about 1 topic instead of talking about gangsta in mommas house then taking about your respect it was ok though
6.77/10.

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S-Own Squod
RB Text Tourney Finalist
Orginal Relaunched Member.
Password Aka The Masked
2nd Moderator on Rapverse Ever
Not quite legendary yet....

its just a story i made up,,,and talking about people claiming to be gangster,,but still living at home,,,,just to add humor to it
but I called It changes because the thug that use to be hard came out of prison a changed man,,,IM just making it a story,,,,,its nothing really,,,,,,i was just spitting shit
to be more creative then any thing else......I give it 8-10, MAKING IT MORE THEN WHAT YOU SAID,,,Because its really what i believe it is,,,if i live off of what others thought,,then what kind of man would i be?
If im living for others an not my self,,,but thanx for the feed back

__________________
My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

Defeat list
Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
none

It's still good nucca you just need to work on your structure a little bit more and make it easier to read , ok?

__________________
S-Own Squod
RB Text Tourney Finalist
Orginal Relaunched Member.
Password Aka The Masked
2nd Moderator on Rapverse Ever
Not quite legendary yet....