westside! westside!
fuck that! lets go.
yo/chuck taylors and gang bangers/
homos and dick slangers/

bloods and crips/gay clubs on da strip/
killa cali westside/shutup wit dat shit/

u prolly reppin da "bu"/like b-rad g/
dis homo prolly got nut hairz stuck in his teeth/

u need to hush dat weak shit/hatin on da god/
u not 213/ill send 123/at this wannabe snoop dogg/

i should take a red eye to dis guys house/
place da head of my big guy inside his momz mouth/

dis fagit walk around wit panties up his ass/
ill pimp slap dis trannie and put em on crenshaw ave./

get at me bitch.

nice shit nigga

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what's up with the half assed reply ^^^^^^

anyway


This wasn't to shabby, flow was good, structure was good for the most part,
Some of your punches didn't really hit hard

for example:

bloods and crips/gay clubs on da strip/
killa cali westside/shutup wit dat shit/

It was alright, guessing it was personal?
but it didn't really hit hard...first line was good
2nd one coulda had some more umph yeh....umph

anywho
it was an alright piece,
keep droppin

this wasn't a bad piece .. i liked some of the lines in it .. nice flow in places .. kinda fell in others .. not that hard hit in it bro .. but good one .. peace

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